帮我找出这段话的语法错误～I must say that I do not agree with this view.Doubtless,for the amour-propre,huge number of people indeed often buy useless products just by reason of others have.Women go to buy shaver as well as men go to buy

帮我找出这段话的语法错误～I must say that I do not agree with this view.Doubtless,for the amour-propre,huge number of people indeed often buy useless products just by reason of others have.Women go to buy shaver as well as men go to buy
帮我找出这段话的语法错误～
I must say that I do not agree with this view.Doubtless,for the amour-propre,huge number of people indeed often buy useless products just by reason of others have.Women go to buy shaver as well as men go to buy cosmetic have been no longer news.Whereas,the majority of people trend to save their money for buying some useful products rather than spend it immoderately.Amour-propre is like a devil,threaten human’s logos.
It is hardly to take the point that a man who is not a rich will buy something that he will never use.The world we live need every one of us to struggle,to strive.Otherwise,we may fail to support our family even ourselves.Most of are not rich,they have no redundant money to squander.If they possess surplus cash,for instance,they may tend to save it as preparing for future using.
There are a huge number of are willing to save their money in stead of use it for occasionally impulse of expenditure.They often be adult.They may be rich or not,the main reason for such direction is based on their planning habit.For example,if one wants to buy a house in this desperately high cost price for housing,he or she may deposited from long before.If they did not take the plan of saving,hardly to say that they will afford the devil liked price.
Also,teenager,the flower of hope of country,has an increasing tendency toward the problem brought by richness.The common swelling attitude of juvenile to compare themselves with their classmates has been at the bottom of attention.For example,lots of student will pay attention to the products their classmates use and if the products are more available,prevalent,even bright than themselves’,they may go to buy the same type or more brilliant product to splurge with the one who has stimulated them.
All in all,the conclusion that whether people often buy something just because others have is not easy to draw in respect that there has no precise statistics to consult,but we can easily find that people who buy products just because of sense of amour-propre are irrationally.The people of such group are in the minority.
一楼，咋了？
一楼，这是我写的…………
2楼，直接粘到“在线翻译”了吧？唉…………你想赚2分儿就赚吧，不用这么辛苦……
哪位看看有什么语法错误

帮我找出这段话的语法错误～I must say that I do not agree with this view.Doubtless,for the amour-propre,huge number of people indeed often buy useless products just by reason of others have.Women go to buy shaver as well as men go to buy
I must say that I do not agree with this view.
Doubtless,for the amour-propre,huge number of people indeed often buy useless products just by reason of others have（for the reason of ,而且短语结构里面不能有动词,have后面不能什么都不接,要么用从句：for the reason of that others have them）.
Women go to buy shaver as well as men go to buy cosmetic have been no longer news.（主语里面不能有动词,用going；要么用从句：it has been no longer news that women buy shaver as well as men buy cosmetic）
Whereas,the majority of people trend to save their money for buying some useful products rather than spend it immoderately.（trend表示流行趋势,要用tend to,表示目的用to+动词原形形式,to buy）
Amour-propre is like a devil,threaten human’s logos.（短语结构里面不能有动词,threatening）
It is hardly to take the point that a man who is not a rich will buy something that he will never use.（it is hard,hardly是程度副词,几乎不；who is not rich,rich是形容词）
The world we live need every one of us to struggle,to strive.（是我们需要奋斗：Each one of us needs to struggle,to strive in this world） Otherwise,we may fail to support our family even ourselves.
Most of are not rich,they have no redundant money to squander.（most of people,of 后面一定要加名词的,两个句子之间要用连词and连接起来,或者用；隔开）
If they possess surplus cash,for instance,they may tend to save it as preparing for future using.（句子要简洁一点,they may tend to save it for future use）
There are a huge number of are willing to save their money in stead of use it for occasionally impulse of expenditure.（of 后面要加上people,instead of 后面要用动词ing形式,用occasional,加了ly之后是副词了）
They often be adult.（be是一类动词的总称,这里应该用：They are often
adults）
They may be rich or not,the main reason for such direction is based on their planning habit.（两个句子之间要有连词；reason 后面都是用of）
For example,if one wants to buy a house in this desperately high cost price for housing,he or she may deposited from long before.（price 都是用at,may 后面跟动词原形,而且deposit是及物动词,后面还要跟东西,加个it 或者something）
If they did not take the plan of saving,hardly to say that they will afford the devil liked price.（if表示假设,可以直接用现在时态,afford多于could,can连用,表示有没有这个能力；合成的形容词,要加个-,devil-liked）
Also,teenager,the flower of hope of country,has an increasing tendency toward the problem brought by richness.（祖国的希望之花?the hope of the country；不要总是跟着中文走,意思到了就可以）
The common swelling attitude of juvenile to compare themselves with their classmates has been at the bottom of attention.（没看懂,是说攀比成风没有得到应有的重视么?It catches little attention that……）
For example,lots of student will pay attention to the products their classmates use and if the products are more available,prevalent,even bright than themselves’,they may go to buy the same type or more brilliant product to splurge with the one who has stimulated them.（students,theirs’,brilliant多用于人,用senior（更高级的意思）,splurge是挥霍但是没有攀比的意思,用compare就可以了,compare with the ones who have stimulated them）
All in all,the conclusion that whether people often buy something just because others have is not easy to draw in respect that there has no precise statistics to consult,but we can easily find that people who buy products just because of sense of amour-propre are irrationally.（用从句：It is not easy to draw the conclusion that……,用there are no precise statistics,irrational是形容词,加了ly是副词）
The people of such group are in the minority.
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不要怨别人,既然什么问题都可以提出来,当然什么回复都会有
感觉你的文章还是动了一番脑子的,议论论证都有,且言之有物；但是主要的问题在于基础不好,词不达意的时候很多,所以要加强语法基础.还有不要太刻意的翻译中文,意思到了就可以了,不一定死抠字眼；祖国的鲜花,英文里面没有这样的表述,这是社会主义国家里面特有的表述,但是表示少年是祖国的希望这个意思是有的.
不知道你现在在念什么,若是还在初中,还能勉强说得过去

我必须说,我不同意这个观点。毫无疑问,自尊,大量的人确实经常买这些无用的产品就因别人。女人去买刨以及男人去买化妆品已不再是新闻。但是,由于多数的人走向存钱的目的购买一些有用的产品,而不是花immoderately。自尊是像一个魔鬼,严重威胁到人类的标志。

这几乎是带点,一个人并不富有,他将会买东西从来没有用。我们生活的这个世界需要我们每一个人的斗争,努力。否则,我们可能不...

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我必须说,我不同意这个观点。毫无疑问,自尊,大量的人确实经常买这些无用的产品就因别人。女人去买刨以及男人去买化妆品已不再是新闻。但是,由于多数的人走向存钱的目的购买一些有用的产品,而不是花immoderately。自尊是像一个魔鬼,严重威胁到人类的标志。

这几乎是带点,一个人并不富有,他将会买东西从来没有用。我们生活的这个世界需要我们每一个人的斗争,努力。否则,我们可能不支持我们的家人甚至我们自己。大多数并不富裕,他们没有多余的钱挥霍。如果他们拥有过剩的现金,举个例子,他们可能倾向于将它保存为准备将来使用。

有大量的愿意拯救他们的钱来代替使用它的冲动,偶尔开支。他们往往是成年人了。他们可以丰富,主要原因是基于这样的方向,他们计划的习惯。例如,如果一个人想买一所房子在住房价格高成本的绝望,他或她可以存放从之前的很长一段时间。如果他们不采取这项计划的存钱,几乎没有说他们将会负担魔鬼喜欢的价格。

同样,十几岁的青少年,花朵的希望已经越来越倾向所带来的问题的财富。常见的肿胀的态度对青少年比较自身和同学们一直在底部的关注。例如,许多学生要注重产品的使用,如果他们的同学都有更多的产品,甚至明亮,普遍比自己的,他们会去购买同一类型或更加辉煌的产品与人挥霍刺激他们。

总的来说,这个结论,无论是人们通常购买东西只因为别人都是不容易的,在尊重并没有精确的统计咨询,但是我们也很容易发现那些购买的产品只因为莫名的自尊是盲目的。这样的人是少数。

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你这整篇文章有太多的错误，有很多地方感觉是直接从中文译过来的，所以问题太多了，没法改。重写一篇吧。

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