最近有两个人在一座珊瑚岛上呆了5天,他们真希望在那儿再多呆一些日子.他们驾着一条严重损坏的小船去维尔京群岛阿密修理.Recently,there are two men lived on a coral island five days.They are very hoped tha
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最近有两个人在一座珊瑚岛上呆了5天,他们真希望在那儿再多呆一些日子.他们驾着一条严重损坏的小船去维尔京群岛阿密修理.Recently,there are two men lived on a coral island five days.They are very hoped tha
最近有两个人在一座珊瑚岛上呆了5天,他们真希望在那儿再多呆一些日子.他们驾着一条严重损坏的小船去维尔京群岛阿密修理.
Recently,there are two men lived on a coral island five days.They are very hoped that they could stay on the island more days.They drived a boat which been seriously spoiled to repair at Virgin Islands
这句英文有没有错误,请指出
原版翻译我有,这里不需要,请就这句英文分析.
最近有两个人在一座珊瑚岛上呆了5天,他们真希望在那儿再多呆一些日子.他们驾着一条严重损坏的小船去维尔京群岛阿密修理.Recently,there are two men lived on a coral island five days.They are very hoped tha
Recently, two men had been on a coral island for five days. They really hoped that they could stay on the island more time .They drived a boat which was seriously spoiled to repair at Virgin Islands.
要用过去是呀,there be 表示存在,觉得还是用人做主语比较好.
一直呆了五天,要用过去完成时,这样更好.
hope是个及物动词,直接就行了,不用用was.
"which been seriously "这里要用was,been不对.
一堆啊！！！[ ]是删掉的，（ ）是添上的
Recently, [there are] two men lived on a coral island （for)five days. They [are very ]hoped that they could stay on the island (for a few )more days.They drived a boat which (has)been seriously spoiled to repair (it) at Virgin Islands
五天前面的and多余，其次是一段时间，应该用for five days,
hoped 用其他词修饰比较好，如badly, heartily
More前面也是加 for
驾船用sail
Which后面加 Had
To repair应用 To had it repaired 因为是别人修不是自己修
Recently, there were two men lived on a coral island （for）five days. They are（ very有问题，我们可以说hope....very much） hoped that they could stay on the island （for）more days.They drived a boat which（have） been seriously spoiled （to改为for） repair at Virgin Islands