帮我点评一下一篇高中英语小文章On the first day of school,my homeroom teacher assigned me with a deskmate,a girl named Liu Min.Dressed in really plain clothes,she looked just like any other girl.I didn’t think she has any special qual
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帮我点评一下一篇高中英语小文章On the first day of school,my homeroom teacher assigned me with a deskmate,a girl named Liu Min.Dressed in really plain clothes,she looked just like any other girl.I didn’t think she has any special qual
帮我点评一下一篇高中英语小文章
On the first day of school,my homeroom teacher assigned me with a deskmate,a girl named Liu Min.
Dressed in really plain clothes,she looked just like any other girl.I didn’t think she has any special qualities in her so I didn’t notice her at all.
However,soon I found out how wrong I was.She was very hard-working; thus,she did well in every subject.She was also a warm-hearted person who couldn’t resist helping others.She gave me a lot of help on my studies and I’m really grateful for everything she had done for me.
I’m really lucky that we became excellent friends over the years and I hope we’ll always be friends.
要求点评有精彩词语 句式 结构 看点
帮我点评一下一篇高中英语小文章On the first day of school,my homeroom teacher assigned me with a deskmate,a girl named Liu Min.Dressed in really plain clothes,she looked just like any other girl.I didn’t think she has any special qual
英语句式错了,而且还有点多.得加强哦,大致意思还是懂了,只是语法、句式、时态方面.
还可以吧!