请帮我看一下我写的英语文章以下是我写的一篇关于奥巴马的英语文章,请帮我纠正一下语法错误.谢谢了. Jan.20th About Barack ObamaTo a lot of Americans,today is doomed to a significant day,because Barack Hussein Jr

请帮我看一下我写的英语文章以下是我写的一篇关于奥巴马的英语文章,请帮我纠正一下语法错误.谢谢了. Jan.20th About Barack ObamaTo a lot of Americans,today is doomed to a significant day,because Barack Hussein Jr
请帮我看一下我写的英语文章
以下是我写的一篇关于奥巴马的英语文章,请帮我纠正一下语法错误.谢谢了. Jan.20th About Barack Obama
To a lot of Americans,today is doomed to a significant day,because Barack Hussein Jr Obama who is said to be a talented speaker will become the 47th president of United States of America after George W Bush.As it's known to us,he is first black president in American history.
He will bring many benefits to Americans and lots of countries after coming into power.First,Obama admires Lincoln who was American 16th president very much since he was young,because Lincoln devoted all himself to liberating black slaves.So Obama takes human's equality seriously.No matter which race the citizen is,he should have the equal rights and status.It must be good for reducing racial discrimination.Secondly Obama promised withdrawing troops from Iraq when he became elect president.Of course it's a good news to Iraqis who have been suffering the huge disasters all the year round in a world of trouble and unrest.Thirdly,Obama advocates one China principle and disapprove Taiwan Independence.Now the Taiwan populace who wants to get the American Green Card shoud write "the Chinese Taiwan"in the place of birth when they fill in the immigrant application form.So there's no doubt that America won't be an big obstacle on the Taiwan quesion and reunification of China.
These above are true,no doubt,but what people fail to consider is that the measures which Obama will take to deal with the financial crisis must do harm to International Trade.Obama encourages American to buy products made in America,stimulating American consumption.It's inevitable that many countries' exports will reduce in a fast speed.If Americans obey Obama's order,the world economics will lose its balance and go worse day by day.
The judgement of Obama varies from person to person after all.As far as I'm concerned,the advantages outweigh the disadvantages because I have always been supporting him ,not only does he have many qualities of a great leader,but he loves peace and he knows how to lead the Americans
to a happy and stable life.I can't forget how firm and determined his expression was when he won the president election.I have faith in him-Barack Obama!
希望看到这篇文章的朋友能够帮帮忙，因为这篇文章对我很重要。。谢谢了。。。

请帮我看一下我写的英语文章以下是我写的一篇关于奥巴马的英语文章,请帮我纠正一下语法错误.谢谢了. Jan.20th About Barack ObamaTo a lot of Americans,today is doomed to a significant day,because Barack Hussein Jr
可以发来邮箱地址吗?有些细节的地方我用Word改出来给你看,这里说不清楚.
比如"No matter which race the citizen is",这里显然不应该是sb "is" one race,而是sb belongs to/comes from/...one race.这样的细节当然不关大局,但是如果希望交流一下的话,我也很愿意说说自己的观点.

很好，没看出毛病。

这么长啊 汗

写得不错诶~~~~~
that means。。。我没挑出毛病来。
不知道是因为我水平不高or真的没毛病。。咳咳
继续努力昂~~
新年快乐~~