请帮忙改下语法错误I get used to lonely and dazeI am still sadDo not you know i have tried to happyBut it do not get no betterAs each day goes byI am lost and confusedI have got nothing to loseyou leave one by oneme a personstay putSorryI can

请帮忙改下语法错误I get used to lonely and dazeI am still sadDo not you know i have tried to happyBut it do not get no betterAs each day goes byI am lost and confusedI have got nothing to loseyou leave one by oneme a personstay putSorryI can
请帮忙改下语法错误
I get used to lonely and daze
I am still sad
Do not you know i have tried to happy
But it do not get no better
As each day goes by
I am lost and confused
I have got nothing to lose
you leave one by one
me a person
stay put
Sorry
I can not stop grieving
because deep of loneliness

请帮忙改下语法错误I get used to lonely and dazeI am still sadDo not you know i have tried to happyBut it do not get no betterAs each day goes byI am lost and confusedI have got nothing to loseyou leave one by oneme a personstay putSorryI can
I get used to lonely(loneliess) and daze
I am still sad
Do not you know i(I) have tried to (^be) happy
But it do(will) not get no better
As each day goes by
I am lost and confused
I have got nothing to lose
you leave one by one
me a person
stay put
Sorry
I can not stop grieving
because (^of )deep( depth) of loneliness
括号中是正确的词,代替前面的词,但有^是插入这个词

I get used to loneliness and daze.
I am still sad
Do not you know i have tried to be happy
But it does not work better
As each day goes by
I am lost and confused
I have got not...

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I get used to loneliness and daze.
I am still sad
Do not you know i have tried to be happy
But it does not work better
As each day goes by
I am lost and confused
I have got nothing to lose
you leave one by one
I stay all alone
stay put(不知何意)
Sorry
I can not help grieving
because of deep loneliness

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I get used to lonely and daze ～【 I've got used to being lonely and dazed.】
I am still sad 没错
Do not you know i have tried to 【be】 happy
But it do not get no better ??? 用中文表述一下你想说什么吧？！

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I get used to lonely and daze ～【 I've got used to being lonely and dazed.】
I am still sad 没错
Do not you know i have tried to 【be】 happy
But it do not get no better ??? 用中文表述一下你想说什么吧？！
As each day goes by 没错
I am lost and confused 没错
I have got nothing to lose 没错
you leave one by one 【you left one after another】
me a person 你要说的是？？
stay put
Sorry
I can not stop grieving 没错
because deep of loneliness 【because of the deep loneliness】

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I get used to loneliness and daze
(不知道你是想说：“我习惯了孤独发呆”还是想说：“我习惯了孤独的发呆”如果是后者就是：I get used to daze in lonliness)
I am still sad
Do you not know i have tried to be happy
(或者 Don't you kno...

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I get used to loneliness and daze
(不知道你是想说：“我习惯了孤独发呆”还是想说：“我习惯了孤独的发呆”如果是后者就是：I get used to daze in lonliness)
I am still sad
Do you not know i have tried to be happy
(或者 Don't you know that I have tried to be happy)
But it does not get any better
With each day passing by
I am lost and confused
I have got nothing to lose
you all left me one by one
now I am all alone
stuck in the same place
Sorry
But I can not stop grieving
because of the deep loneliness within my heart
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那个，
you leave one by one
me a person
stay put
这一段不大明白是什么意思，只是猜测是：你们一个又一个的离开了我，我一个人，待在原地，所以就这么给你翻译了。
希望对你有帮助~
天~
p.s.冒昧问一句，这是首诗，还是歌词？

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I get used to loneliness and daze (get used to + noun)
But I am still sad (加conjunction比较好)
Don’t you know I have tried to be happy(反问用contraction,另外happy是adj,前面要有verb to be)
But it doesn’...

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I get used to loneliness and daze (get used to + noun)
But I am still sad (加conjunction比较好)
Don’t you know I have tried to be happy(反问用contraction,另外happy是adj,前面要有verb to be)
But it doesn’t get better (it要用does,另外既然不是formal的文体就该用contraction)
As every day goes by(在这情况最好用every)
I am lost and confused
I have got nothing to lose
You leave one by one
I’m still alone (这句不好解释)
Stay put(感觉上怪怪的不过可以接受)
Sorry
I can’t stop grieving(contraction是重点,不过就算不是这问题,不可以也只有cannot没有can not)
Because loneliness tears through me (也不好解释,是语意问题)

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