这段话有语法错误吗?顺便修饰一下检查语法不恰当的地方We went to Warwick Castle today.There was a large square about4000squares.Many tourists stood around the spuare.Two knight were introduce many kinds of weapons in the middle

这段话有语法错误吗?顺便修饰一下检查语法不恰当的地方We went to Warwick Castle today.There was a large square about4000squares.Many tourists stood around the spuare.Two knight were introduce many kinds of weapons in the middle
这段话有语法错误吗?顺便修饰一下
检查语法不恰当的地方
We went to Warwick Castle today.There was a large square about4000squares.Many tourists stood around the spuare.Two knight were introduce many kinds of weapons in the middle of the square.There are a great number of wax figures and armors in the castle.The most popular thing is the Warwick ghosts.I bought three tickets for two classmates and I,because I was really interested but feared.Oh,it was extremely scary,I don't want to think it again.In the afternoon,we visited 莎士比亚故居（这怎么翻译啊）,kind of boring.

这段话有语法错误吗?顺便修饰一下检查语法不恰当的地方We went to Warwick Castle today.There was a large square about4000squares.Many tourists stood around the spuare.Two knight were introduce many kinds of weapons in the middle
错误的地方：1．There has a large square and the square is about 4000squaers.
2．Two knigets were ineroduced...
3．because I was really interested about it but feared about it.
4．scary and I...
翻译是：sharespare's old house
最后一句是：It was boring.

Two knights were introducing
interested also feared

We went to Warwick Castle today.There was a large piazza about 4000 square meters,where Many tourists stood around.And we saw Two workers dressed like knights introducing many kinds of ancient weapons...

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We went to Warwick Castle today.There was a large piazza about 4000 square meters,where Many tourists stood around.And we saw Two workers dressed like knights introducing many kinds of ancient weapons in the middle of the square.In the castle,there are a great number of wax figures and armors.The most welcomed thing is the Warwick ghosts.I bought three tickets for two classmates and me,because I was really feared though very interested about it.Oh,it was extremely scary.I can't think it again.In the afternoon,we visited the old house where Shakespear used to live.It's a little kind of boring。

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