短文改错题I'd like to tell you something more about our schoolsport meet.It was holding on Oct.6,which was afine day.There was over 600 students and teachers attend it.Wang lin ,a student from my class won the 100-race He finish the race in 12.6
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短文改错题I'd like to tell you something more about our schoolsport meet.It was holding on Oct.6,which was afine day.There was over 600 students and teachers attend it.Wang lin ,a student from my class won the 100-race He finish the race in 12.6
短文改错题
I'd like to tell you something more about our school
sport meet.It was holding on Oct.6,which was a
fine day.There was over 600 students and teachers
attend it.Wang lin ,a student from my class won the
100-race He finish the race in 12.6 seconds
and broke in the school record.The sports meet
was really success.That was because we were
all trying my best.
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短文改错题I'd like to tell you something more about our schoolsport meet.It was holding on Oct.6,which was afine day.There was over 600 students and teachers attend it.Wang lin ,a student from my class won the 100-race He finish the race in 12.6
1.去掉something 或 去掉more
2.holding → held
3.was → were
4.attend → attending
5.finish → finished
6.去掉in
7.success → successful 或 在success前加上a
8.my → our
holding-held
there was-there were
attend-attending
finish-finished
broke in the school record-broke the school record
success-a success
my best-our best