请大家帮我看看,我写的这些有没有什么错误If I win one million dollars.I will buy a bigger house and a car first give my parents.Then I will contribute one hundred thousand dollars.Finally I will travel the world.The rest of money,I'l

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请大家帮我看看,我写的这些有没有什么错误IfIwinonemilliondollars.Iwillbuyabiggerhouseandacarfirstgivemyparents.ThenIwillc

请大家帮我看看,我写的这些有没有什么错误If I win one million dollars.I will buy a bigger house and a car first give my parents.Then I will contribute one hundred thousand dollars.Finally I will travel the world.The rest of money,I'l
请大家帮我看看,我写的这些有没有什么错误
If I win one million dollars.
I will buy a bigger house and a car first give my parents.
Then I will contribute one hundred thousand dollars.
Finally I will travel the world.
The rest of money,I'll give a half to my parents to manage,another half perhaps would be used to build an indoor basketball court.

请大家帮我看看,我写的这些有没有什么错误If I win one million dollars.I will buy a bigger house and a car first give my parents.Then I will contribute one hundred thousand dollars.Finally I will travel the world.The rest of money,I'l
give - for
Then I will contribute one hundred thousand dollars. 句意不完整, 给谁啊? 如果是给慈善机构, 那么后面要加to charity
money - the money
a half - half
to manage - for safe keeping
another - the other

不错哦,一些小问题
If I win one million dollars.
I will FIRST buy a bigger house and a car AND give THEM TO my parents.
Then I will DONATE one hundred thousand dollars.
Finally I will travel...

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不错哦,一些小问题
If I win one million dollars.
I will FIRST buy a bigger house and a car AND give THEM TO my parents.
Then I will DONATE one hundred thousand dollars.
Finally I will travel the world.
FOR the rest of THE money, I'll give (没有a)half to my parents to manage, AND THE OTHER half perhaps would be used to build an indoor basketball court.
可以用manage 管理吗,不一定仅仅是保管(safekeeping)的意思
the parents can manage the money by investing it, whereas safekeeping means the money is untouched

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