剑桥4 test1 writing task1 请英文好的帮忙改错～In the present age,with the development of technology and individuals’ demands of communication,there are increasingly types of media appeared in our daily life.I have choice three kinds of

剑桥4 test1 writing task1 请英文好的帮忙改错～In the present age,with the development of technology and individuals’ demands of communication,there are increasingly types of media appeared in our daily life.I have choice three kinds of
剑桥4 test1 writing task1 请英文好的帮忙改错～
In the present age,with the development of technology and individuals’ demands of communication,there are increasingly types of media appeared in our daily life.I have choice three kinds of them I think have both advantages and disadvantages.
First,television is the most effective medium for communicating information in my mind.It is reasonable due to the fact that people can receive up-to-the-minute coverage in any time.Moreover,there are varieties of choices for TV audiences; therefore,they have opportunity to distinguish right from wrong.In terms of disadvantages,it is obvious that the financial gap between urban area and the rural area should eliminated by the authorities.To be more precise,the government should invest more money in TV industries.
Secondly,radio is also an imperative way for communicating information.On the one hand,there are two words to describe radio---cheap and convenient.In fact,it is totally free and the signals are prevalent; thus people are able to listen to the radio wherever they want.On the other hand,when a person listens to the radio,he/she always has no choice but listen.
Thirdly,books are the most traditional way for us to get information.The aged tend to only rely on this medium to acquire information.Unfortunately,it is not popular in youngster due to the slow rate of update.
Overall,I would say that the television is the best way of conveying information.
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剑桥4 test1 writing task1 请英文好的帮忙改错～In the present age,with the development of technology and individuals’ demands of communication,there are increasingly types of media appeared in our daily life.I have choice three kinds of
NOWADAYS,with the development of technology and PERSONAL demands for communication,INCRESING TYPES OF MEDIA HAS BEEN DEVELOPED.I WOULD LIKE TO COMPARE AND ANALYZE THREE OF THEM IN TERMS OF ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES
First,television is the most effective COMMUNICATION medium TO my mind FOR (the fact that) people can receive up-to-the-minute coverage(BU ZHI DAO) in any time.Moreover,TV AUDIENCES HAS GOT A NUMBER OF OPTIONS (FOR WHAT); therefore,they have OPPORTUNITIES to distinguish right from wrong.AS FOR disadvantages,it is obvious that the financial gap between urban area and rural area EXISTS AND should BE eliminated by the authorities.ANYWAY,the government should invest more in TV industrY.
Second,radio is also IMPORTANT for communicating information.RADIO CAN BE DESCRIBED BY TWO WORDS---cheap and convenient.ON THE ONE HAND,it is totally free and ITS SIGNAL CAN COVER A HUGE AREA,S0 technically people are able to listen to the radio wheENver they want.On the other hand,RADIO DEVICES ARE PORTABLE WHICH ALLOWS PEOPLE TO ACCESS TO INFORMATION WHEREVER THEY ARE.HOWEVER,YOU CAN NOT ACCESS TO THE VIVID IMAGE WHEN USING RADIO
Third,books are the most traditional SOURCE OF information.The elderly tend to only rely on this medium to acquire information.Unfortunately,it is not popular in young GROUP due to the slow rate of update.
Overall,I would LIKE TO say that the television is the best way of conveying information

In the present age, with the development of technology and individuals’ demands of communication, there are INCREASING types of media APPEARING in our daily life. I have CHOSEN three kinds of them WHI...

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In the present age, with the development of technology and individuals’ demands of communication, there are INCREASING types of media APPEARING in our daily life. I have CHOSEN three kinds of them WHICH I think have both advantages and disadvantages.
FIRSTLY, television is the most effective medium for communicating information in my OPINION. It is reasonable due to the fact that people can receive up-to-the-minute coverage AT any time. Moreover, there are varieties of choices for TV audiences; therefore, they have THE opportunitINES to distinguish BETWEEN right AND wrong. In terms of disadvantages, it is obvious that the financial gap between urban area and the rural area should BE eliminated by the authorities. To be more precise, the government should invest more money in TV industries.
Secondly, radio is also an imperative way OF communicating information. On the one hand, there are two words to describe radio---cheap and convenient. In fact, it is totally free and the signals are prevalent; thus people are able to listen to the radio wherever they want. On the other hand, when a person listens to the radio, he/she always has no other choice but listen.
Thirdly, books are the most traditional way for us to get information. The aged tend to only rely on this medium to acquire information. Unfortunately, it is not popular in youngster due to the slow rate of update.
Overall, I would say that the television is the best way of conveying information.

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In the present age, with the development of technology and individuals’ demands of communication, there are increasingly types of media appeared(应为appearing) in our daily life. I have choice (应为chosen...

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In the present age, with the development of technology and individuals’ demands of communication, there are increasingly types of media appeared(应为appearing) in our daily life. I have choice (应为chosen)three kinds of them (应加上that或which)I think have both advantages and disadvantages.
First(应为Firstly), television is the most effective medium for communicating information in my mind(改为opinion). It is reasonable (应为reasonably)due to the fact that people can receive up-to-the-minute coverage in (应为at)any time. Moreover, there are varieties of choices for TV audiences; therefore, they have opportunity (应为opportunities)to distinguish right from wrong. In terms of disadvantages, it is obvious that the financial gap between urban area and the rural area should (应加上be)eliminated by the authorities. To be more precise, the government should invest more money in (改为to)TV industries.
Secondly, radio is also an imperative way for communicating information. On the one hand, there are two words to describe radio---cheap and convenient. In fact, it is totally free and the signals are prevalent; thus people are able to listen to the radio wherever they want(应为go). On the other hand, when a person listens to the radio, he/she always has no choice but (加上to)listen.
Thirdly, books are the most traditional way for us to get information. The aged tend to only rely on this medium to acquire information. Unfortunately, it is not popular in (改为with)youngster due to the slow rate of update.
Overall, I would say that the television is the best way of conveying information.

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在当今时代，随着技术的发展和个人通信的需求，有越来越多类型的媒体在日常生活中出现。我有三种选择，其中有两种，我认为有利有弊。
首先，电视是在我的脑海沟通信息的最有效的媒介。这是合理的原因在于，人们最多可以收到对在任何时间分钟的报道。此外，还有一些品种的选择电视的观众，因此，他们有机会分清是非。在缺点方面，
很明显，城市之间的地区和农村地区的财政缺口，当局应取消。为了更准确，政府应该...

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在当今时代，随着技术的发展和个人通信的需求，有越来越多类型的媒体在日常生活中出现。我有三种选择，其中有两种，我认为有利有弊。
首先，电视是在我的脑海沟通信息的最有效的媒介。这是合理的原因在于，人们最多可以收到对在任何时间分钟的报道。此外，还有一些品种的选择电视的观众，因此，他们有机会分清是非。在缺点方面，
很明显，城市之间的地区和农村地区的财政缺口，当局应取消。为了更准确，政府应该投资于电视行业更多的钱。
第三，书籍是最传统的方法，让我们获得的信息。老年人往往只能依靠这种媒介获取信息。不幸的是，它不是流行的青少年由于更新速度缓慢。
总之，我会说，电视是传达信息的最佳途径
这是你的短文的意思，我看不是因为单词错了，而是作文水平比我还差。

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