懂英文的朋友来看看我写的对不对,回答仔细满意者追加50分,谢谢The Wangs live at 87 Beijing road. In the morning,Mr.Wang goes to work and the children go to school.Their father takes them to school every day.Mrs Wang stays at ho

懂英文的朋友来看看我写的对不对,回答仔细满意者追加50分,谢谢The Wangs live at 87 Beijing road. In the morning,Mr.Wang goes to work and the children go to school.Their father takes them to school every day.Mrs Wang stays at ho
懂英文的朋友来看看我写的对不对,回答仔细满意者追加50分,谢谢
The Wangs live at 87 Beijing road. In the morning,Mr.Wang goes to work and the children go to school.Their father takes them to school every day.Mrs Wang stays at home every day.She does the housework.She always eats lunch at noon.In the afternoon,she usually sees her frieds .They usually drink tea together.In the
evening,the children come home from school .They arrive home early. Mr.Wang come home from work.He comes home late
At noon,children always do their homework,then they go to bed .Mr Wang usually reads his newspaper,bet sometimes he and his wife watch television

懂英文的朋友来看看我写的对不对,回答仔细满意者追加50分,谢谢The Wangs live at 87 Beijing road. In the morning,Mr.Wang goes to work and the children go to school.Their father takes them to school every day.Mrs Wang stays at ho
The Wangs live at(in) 87 Beijing road.In the morning,Mr.Wang goes to work and the children go to school.Their father takes them to school every day.Mrs Wang stays at home every day.She does the housework.She always eats(has) lunch at noon.In the afternoon,she usually sees her frieds (friends).They usually drink tea together.In the
evening,the children come home(come back) from school .They arrive home early.Mr.Wang come home from work.He comes home late
At noon(night),children always do their homework,then they go to bed .Mr Wang usually reads his (the) newspaper,bet(but) sometimes he and his wife watch television.

chinglish
知道你想些什么 但完全没用英语的方式表达出来
特别是 She always eats lunch at noon 逻辑没对 语法也没对
没法改……

In the afternoon,she usually sees her frieds
see--visit
frieds不用我说了吧
At noon？是night吧,大中午的go to bed
bet--but
全文连贯性不强，可以加一些连词，比如and but 等

第2排的最后一个词the应去掉，第3句开头有歧义，第4句的every day与前一句的重复，第6句应是has lunch.第九句改成come back home要好一些，第11句应用comes,最后一句把"bet"改为but,第1句"at"改为in,frieds改为friends