语法错误修改The information given by the graph is about the global water use by sector and water consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000.According to the line graph,global water use in three main ways which are agriculture,industrial use and do

语法错误修改The information given by the graph is about the global water use by sector and water consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000.According to the line graph,global water use in three main ways which are agriculture,industrial use and do
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The information given by the graph is about the global water use by sector and water consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000.
According to the line graph,global water use in three main ways which are agriculture,industrial use and domestic use.More exactly,the water use keeps rising from 1900 to 2000.These three parts grew steadily between the years 1900 and 1950.Then,agriculture increased to 3000 km3 markedly in 2000.And the industrial use went up exceed 1000 in 2000.
As can be seen from the table,the compared with Brazil and Congo in three aspects in 2000.To be exact,Brazil has 176 million population and Congo has 5.2 million.About the irrigated land,there are 26,500 km2 (Brazil) and 100 km2 (Congo).The water consumption per person in Brazil was 359 m3,which only 8 m3 in Congo.

语法错误修改The information given by the graph is about the global water use by sector and water consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000.According to the line graph,global water use in three main ways which are agriculture,industrial use and do
...global water use is found in three main ways,namely,agricultural use,industrial use and domestic use....Then the agricultural use...
As can be seen from the graph (上文未见table）,Brazil and the Congo (刚果前习惯有冠词）are compared in three .Brazil had a poulation of 176 million and the Congo 5.2 million.With regard to irrigated land,...and 100 km2 in the Congo.The water consumption.while that in the Congo was only 359 m3.

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The information given by the graph is about the global water used by sector and water consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000.
According to the line graph, global water is use...

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The information given by the graph is about the global water used by sector and water consumption in Brazil and Congo in 2000.
According to the line graph, global water is used in three main ways which are agriculture,industrial and domestic use. More exactly,the water use keeps rising from 1900 to 2000.These three parts grew steadily from 1900 to 1950. Then, agriculture use increased to 3000 km3 markedly in 2000. And the industrial use went up to 1000 in 2000.
As can be seen from the table, the compare between Brazil and Congo is in three aspects in 2000. To be exact,Brazil has a population of 176 million and Congo has 5.2 million. As to the irrigated land, there is 26,500 km2 (Brazil) and 100 km2 (Congo). The water consumption per person in Brazil is 359 m3, while only 8 m3 in Congo.

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