这句英语对马The term "mortgage slave" was coined to describe people who bought houses on mortgage and have to pay quite big part of their incomes to repay loans."Mortgage slave" often suffers from a short of cash and a decline of life quantity.

这句英语对马The term "mortgage slave" was coined to describe people who bought houses on mortgage and have to pay quite big part of their incomes to repay loans."Mortgage slave" often suffers from a short of cash and a decline of life quantity.
这句英语对马The term "mortgage slave" was coined to describe people who bought houses on mortgage and have to pay quite big part of their incomes to repay loans."Mortgage slave" often suffers from a short of cash and a decline of life quantity.They usually shoulders higher pressures than others
i wrote it,thanks

这句英语对马The term "mortgage slave" was coined to describe people who bought houses on mortgage and have to pay quite big part of their incomes to repay loans."Mortgage slave" often suffers from a short of cash and a decline of life quantity.
我发现两处错误：
quantity应该是quality（生活质量,不是生活数量）
higher pressures应该是greater pressure(压力不是高低,而是大小,压力是不可数的）
另外还有你的问题中：对吗,不是对马

可以用higher pressure的
quite 后加上 a
life quantity 应该是 life quality 吧 ，生活质量
the term形容的应该是一般状态 用现在时就好 people who buy
所以 完整的呢 我改成：The term "mortgage slave" was coined to describe people who ...

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可以用higher pressure的
quite 后加上 a
life quantity 应该是 life quality 吧 ，生活质量
the term形容的应该是一般状态 用现在时就好 people who buy
所以 完整的呢 我改成：The term "mortgage slave" was coined to describe people who buy houses on mortgage and have to pay quite a big part of their incomes to repay loans."Mortgage slave" often suffers from a short of cash and a decline of life quality.They usually shoulders higher pressures than others.

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我觉得其他的问题没有，主要就是单复数和第三人称的问题，我觉得应该改成一下这样，仅供参考！
The term "mortgage slave" was coined to describe people who bought house on mortgage and has to pay quite big part of his incomes to repay loans. Mortg...

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我觉得其他的问题没有，主要就是单复数和第三人称的问题，我觉得应该改成一下这样，仅供参考！
The term "mortgage slave" was coined to describe people who bought house on mortgage and has to pay quite big part of his incomes to repay loans. Mortgage slaves often suffer from short cash and decline their life quantity. They usually shoulder higher pressures than others.

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