写了封英语信,求改错,格式语法时态,Dear Justin Bieber,I come from China,my name is Betty Wu.I heard you were going to China's Shanghai concert,I was so excited.But my home is far away from Shanghai,and I in October 5th to school,so I wil

写了封英语信,求改错,格式语法时态,Dear Justin Bieber,I come from China,my name is Betty Wu.I heard you were going to China's Shanghai concert,I was so excited.But my home is far away from Shanghai,and I in October 5th to school,so I wil
写了封英语信,求改错,格式语法时态,
Dear Justin Bieber,
I come from China,my name is Betty Wu.I heard you were going to China's Shanghai concert,I was so excited.But my home is far away from Shanghai,and I in October 5th to school,so I will can not go to your concert.I'm sorry.
My heart has been beating with you.I love your music,your smile,your dance,your everything.
In Beliebers heart,you will always be the best.When you were young,I liked your cute and humor In your adulthood,I like your handsome and humor.In short,I believe that April Fool's Day is tailored specifically for you.
"I love you " is that you often hear right?But you may not know "I love you" in Chinese how to write.It is translated into Chinese as "我爱你" .I hope you can say this word very heartfelt way with Selena
In China,your fans like to call you a "宝" "宝" in English means "baby".You are our B宝.Inside the envelope are my favorite photos.I hope to get your autograph "Justin Bieber".
China's beliebers all love you.We are all united and goodness,because we love the same person.
My English is not good,please forgive me.I hope your vocals more rods.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Betty

写了封英语信,求改错,格式语法时态,Dear Justin Bieber,I come from China,my name is Betty Wu.I heard you were going to China's Shanghai concert,I was so excited.But my home is far away from Shanghai,and I in October 5th to school,so I wil
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I hear you are going going to Shanghai to hold a concert
I am so excited.
...on October 5th...
...your dance and everything you do.
I like your handsome appearance and your humor.
...is what you often hear,isn't it?
希望对你有所帮助.

1.Chinese Shanghai concert （没有China's这种用法）2.But …and I'll go to school in October, I'm sorry I cannot go to your concert（but so 不可连用，cannot 必须这样写，不能写can not）\7
第二段有点没看懂，我的心随你的音乐而鼓动吗？belieber是什么？不用...

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1.Chinese Shanghai concert （没有China's这种用法）2.But …and I'll go to school in October, I'm sorry I cannot go to your concert（but so 不可连用，cannot 必须这样写，不能写can not）\7
第二段有点没看懂，我的心随你的音乐而鼓动吗？belieber是什么？不用加will，直接说，you are always the best显得更笃定喔。love your cute and humor，这里用名词，可爱loveliness，感觉这和下句青年期得幽默重合了，在下句愚人节为你专门而设定，为什么我觉得有种讽刺得感觉啊\7
Inside the envelope is my …I hope I can get your autograph…Chinese beliebers…we are all united and nice\7
大概这样吧

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