帮忙改错、1. when i will grow up ,i'm going to do some interesting things. 2. My mom always asks me to do what do i want to do . 3. I'm gong to retire beautiful somewhere. 4.

帮忙改错、1. when i will grow up ,i'm going to do some interesting things. 2. My mom always asks me to do what do i want to do . 3. I'm gong to retire beautiful somewhere. 4. 有两道英语改错题请大家帮忙1. lily has left shanghai last Monday.She is going to Beijing.2.I have met one of my friends when I came home last evening.请在半小时之内给出答案.谢谢 When I walk past,I hear them shour .(改错) when i was a child i liked festivals短文改错 改错 I don’t know when will they come he was play tennis when I saw him 改错 please wake up me when I fall asleep改错 改错：When I come in,Xiaoming was flying a kite. Tom and I be swinmming,not running.帮忙改错 1.We have classes from monday at Friday 2.when it rains,I make a taxi to the library.改错 帮忙改错：My brother can drive a car when he was very young. 帮忙做英语短文改错题,急用,(每行一个）When I got back my hotel room at 7:30 last night(1.)there was a notice that a Mr Frank Smith(2.)had telephoned at 3 o'clock in the afternoon and that(3.)the message told Mr Smith would appreciate I saw a dog in the road when i was driving to London改错 when i entered the room,i was surprise to see anake on my bed.改错 I can fly kites when I was seven years old 改错 I heard someone open the door when I passed by 改错 改错：O’clock .I fell a bit of sleepy when I heard a strange noise . when I entred the room ,I found that it smelled fish改错