帮我鉴别一下这篇作文有什么语法上的错误 改出来 Each mother is very great and she does lots of things for us and gives us endless love.My mother is great,too.She can cook delicious food so I want to give her a surprise.I remembere

帮我鉴别一下这篇作文有什么语法上的错误 改出来 Each mother is very great and she does lots of things for us and gives us endless love.My mother is great,too.She can cook delicious food so I want to give her a surprise.I remembere
帮我鉴别一下这篇作文有什么语法上的错误 改出来
Each mother is very great and she does lots of things for us and gives us endless love.My mother is great,too.She can cook delicious food so I want to give her a surprise.I remembered I bought a book about how to cook.And read it for several days.Then I began to prepare the vegetables and meat.I wanted to mad dumplings because they are my mother's favorite.It took me about an hour to make dumplings.Of course it was hard to me and I felt tired but happy.When my mother came back home,she couldn't believe that.She praised me.From them on I learnt different ways of cooking and helped do some housework,too.I think it's our duty to help our parents.

帮我鉴别一下这篇作文有什么语法上的错误 改出来 Each mother is very great and she does lots of things for us and gives us endless love.My mother is great,too.She can cook delicious food so I want to give her a surprise.I remembere
All mothers are great. They do lots of things for us and give us endless love. My mother is no exception. I enjoy the delicious food that she can cook, so I wanted to give her a surprise. I remembered a book on cooking that I had bought, and read it for several days. Then, I began to prepare the vegetables and meat. I decided to make dumplings, because they are my mother's favorite. It took me about an hour. When my mother returned home, she couldn't believe what she saw. Overjoyed, she praised me. From then on, I began to learn more methods in cooking and helped with housework, too. I think helping our parents is our duty.
整体写的不错.帮你统一了时态,改了些拼法,修了几个标点符号,再把个别句子弄得顺了些.
你需要的话我可以把语法错误一条条列举.

Every mother is great（统领全文）.Mother does a lot for children with endless love. My mother is great, too. She is good at cooking. One day I wanted to give her a surprise. I bought a book about cooking an...

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Every mother is great（统领全文）.Mother does a lot for children with endless love. My mother is great, too. She is good at cooking. One day I wanted to give her a surprise. I bought a book about cooking and learnt cooking for several days. I would make dumplings, because they are my mother's favorite.Then I began to prepare. It took me about an hour to make dumplings. Of course it was hard for me,at last I was tired, but still happy. When my mother came back home, she couldn't believe that. She praised me. From this case I learnt different ways of cooking and how to do housework. I think it's our duty to help our parents.

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你为什么不去问你的老师。就是没老师才问这的啊 晕死。Each mother is very great and she does lots of things for us and gives us endless love. My mother is great. She can cook delicious food so I want to give her a surprise. I re...

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你为什么不去问你的老师。

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