谁来帮我做下下面这个英语改错````救命的``Good health is the person's most valuable possessiontoday,it is much easier to be healthy than it was thepast.Modern people know more than health,have better food,and live in clean surroundings

谁来帮我做下下面这个英语改错````救命的``Good health is the person's most valuable possessiontoday,it is much easier to be healthy than it was thepast.Modern people know more than health,have better food,and live in clean surroundings
谁来帮我做下下面这个英语改错````救命的``
Good health is the person's most valuable possession
today,it is much easier to be healthy than it was the
past.Modern people know more than health,
have better food,and live in clean surroundings.
Also,scientists and doctors had learnt how to deal with
many diseases.Most people can quickly get for help
from a doctor or go to a hospital since they are ill.As a
result,people in the modern world generally lived longer
than people used to.People in developing countries can
expect to live for twice as long as people lived a few
hundred years ago.
没一横都有一个错误，一共10个错误‘‘‘

谁来帮我做下下面这个英语改错````救命的``Good health is the person's most valuable possessiontoday,it is much easier to be healthy than it was thepast.Modern people know more than health,have better food,and live in clean surroundings
1. the--a
2. in the past
3. 正确
4. cleaner
5. had--have
6. for去掉
7. since--for
8. will generally live
9. used to do
10.lived--did

Good health is the most important part of our life,It's much easier to keep one's health than before.In our modern society,people konw much things about how to keep health,such as have better food and...

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Good health is the most important part of our life,It's much easier to keep one's health than before.In our modern society,people konw much things about how to keep health,such as have better food and live in a clean surrounding.
Scientises and doctors have learnt how to crue many disease.Many people can get help from a doctor or go to hospital as soon as possible when he feel something wrong with his body.
As a result,People live in modern society live longer than before. And some people who live in developing countries can live for twice as long as people who lived a few hundred years ago.

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the--a
in the past
than--about
had--have
fot去掉
lived--live
use to do
long--well

第二行was后面加in
第三行than改成about
第四行clean改成cleaner
第五行had改成have
第六行for去掉
第七行since改成when
倒数第四行lived改成live
倒数第三行can改成are
倒数第二行as去掉