求大神们看看我的英语作文,正确不?In the interesting story,the monkey’s paw is very magi- cal.It can bring people three wishes,but the people have to lose something.Family af- fections and money,I think family affections is very im- po

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求大神们看看我的英语作文,正确不?Intheinterestingstory,themonkey’spawisverymagi-cal.Itcanbringpeoplethreewishes,butt

求大神们看看我的英语作文,正确不?In the interesting story,the monkey’s paw is very magi- cal.It can bring people three wishes,but the people have to lose something.Family af- fections and money,I think family affections is very im- po
求大神们看看我的英语作文,正确不?
In the interesting story,the monkey’s paw is very magi- cal.It can bring people three wishes,but the people have to lose something.Family af- fections and money,I think family affections is very im- portant.We can’t give up fa- mily affections for money.And as a people,we can’t be greedy!If you still greedy,then you’ll meet some bad things!
有些地方有杠杠,请不要管,那个是排版的问题。呵呵

求大神们看看我的英语作文,正确不?In the interesting story,the monkey’s paw is very magi- cal.It can bring people three wishes,but the people have to lose something.Family af- fections and money,I think family affections is very im- po
I think family affections is very im- portant.
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不正确。。。。。。。。。。。。

有一个在线英语写作练习与评估系统,挺不错的,写完了可以告诉你哪里写的不好。挺好用的。

people做民族讲时是可数名词
做人民讲时是集体名词,
没有复数和单数之分你可以写成as a person

问一下老师