修改段落(英文)Finally, there are two open question talked about the effects of juvenile delinquency on society. Some people consider juvenile delinquency lead to a chaos society and destroy the harmonious society, therefore they suggest young o

修改段落(英文)Finally, there are two open question talked about the effects of juvenile delinquency on society. Some people consider juvenile delinquency lead to a chaos society and destroy the harmonious society, therefore they suggest young o
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Finally, there are two open question talked about the effects of juvenile delinquency on society. Some people consider juvenile delinquency lead to a chaos society and destroy the harmonious society, therefore they suggest young offenders should go to prison and let their know how serious juvenile delinquency is; however, others do not think so, although juvenile offenders would impact other general people, even make other people fear, they are too young to go to prison, young people should be given opportunities and also they can be taught easily, hence they argue that young offenders should go to community service.
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修改段落(英文)Finally, there are two open question talked about the effects of juvenile delinquency on society. Some people consider juvenile delinquency lead to a chaos society and destroy the harmonious society, therefore they suggest young o
Finally,there are two open discussions concerning the effects of juvenile delinquency on society.Some people believe/think that juvenile delinquency will eventually destroy the harmony of the society and lead to chaos.Therefore they suggest that young offenders should be put away so that they'll learn the serious consequences of their actions.However,others don't agree with that opinion.They think that although juvenile offenders do have impact on the general public,sometimes even cause fear,they are still too young to be put in jail.Instead they should be given the opportunity to learn from their mistakes.So these people's opinion is that young offenders should do community service instead of serving time in prison.

Finally, there are two open questions talking about the effects of juvenile delinquency on society. Some people consider juvenile delinquency leads to a chaos society and destroys the harmonious socie...

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Finally, there are two open questions talking about the effects of juvenile delinquency on society. Some people consider juvenile delinquency leads to a chaos society and destroys the harmonious society. Therefore, they suggest that young offenders should go to the prison and let their know how serious juvenile delinquency is; However, others do not think so, although juvenile offenders would influence other general people, even make other people scared, they are too young to go to prison. In fact they should be given the opportunity because they have less social experiences and can be influenced easily. Therefore, they suggest that those people should go to the community service.

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Finally, there are two opposite points of view as to the effects of juvenile delinquency on society. Some people think that juvenile delinquency lead to chaos and destroy the harmony of society, and t...

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Finally, there are two opposite points of view as to the effects of juvenile delinquency on society. Some people think that juvenile delinquency lead to chaos and destroy the harmony of society, and therefore young offenders should be put into prison to make them know how serious the crime is. However, others do not think so. Although juvenile offenders would produce bad impact on surrounding people, bringing them fear, they are too young and should be given opportunities. As it is easier to educate a young person, they argue that young offenders should be punished only by going for community service.
你是不是改过好几段？我怎么觉得这一段时间青少年犯罪的要修改的好几个呢

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Finally, there are two open questions talking about the effects of juvenile delinquency on society. Some people consider juvenile delinquency leading to a chaos society and destroying the harmonious s...

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Finally, there are two open questions talking about the effects of juvenile delinquency on society. Some people consider juvenile delinquency leading to a chaos society and destroying the harmonious society, therefore they suggest young offenders go to prison and let them know how serious juvenile delinquency is; however, the others do not think so, although juvenile offenders would impact on other general people, even make other people fear, they are too young to go to prison, young people should be given opportunities and also they can be taught easily, hence they argue that young offenders should go to community service.

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Finally, there are two open discussions about the impacts of juvenile delinquency on society. Some people maintain that juvenile delinquency lead to chaos and destroy harmony, thus they sugges...

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Finally, there are two open discussions about the impacts of juvenile delinquency on society. Some people maintain that juvenile delinquency lead to chaos and destroy harmony, thus they suggest young offenders should be sentenced to imprisonment and learn the seriousness of their actions/behaviors. Others hold that juvenile offenders are too young for prison, even though they sometimes intimidate the general public and threaten public safety. Since youngsters learn fast, they should be given another opportunity to learn from their mistakes. Therefore, they should do community service instead of going to jail.

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