帮忙修改英语作文（初二）The math teacher Mr Liu was my math teacher when I was in a primary school.He is knowledge and friendly.And very kind.How time flies!Now I amstudying in a mdeium school.And i never have forget he.When I became a gr

帮忙修改英语作文（初二）The math teacher Mr Liu was my math teacher when I was in a primary school.He is knowledge and friendly.And very kind.How time flies!Now I amstudying in a mdeium school.And i never have forget he.When I became a gr
帮忙修改英语作文（初二）
The math teacher
Mr Liu was my math teacher when I was in a primary school.He is knowledge and friendly.And very kind.
How time flies!Now I amstudying in a mdeium school.And i never have forget he.
When I became a grade six student.I was very lazy And I often forget to do my homework.One day,Mr Liu let us to pass the homework to he.But I didn't to do the homework yesterday.And the monitor was said it to Mr Liu.I was very nervous when Mr Liu was talked to me outside the classroom.He wasn't strict criticize anything .He only talked a funng store to me .And I was very regretted.
This is my favorite teacher,How great he is!

帮忙修改英语作文（初二）The math teacher Mr Liu was my math teacher when I was in a primary school.He is knowledge and friendly.And very kind.How time flies!Now I amstudying in a mdeium school.And i never have forget he.When I became a gr
Mr Liu was my math teacher when I was in a primary school.He (was knowledgeable) and friendly.And (he was) very kind.
How time flies!Now I (study) in a (middle) school.(But I have never forgotten him).
(I was very lazy when I was a grade six student.) And I often (forgot) to do my homework.One day,Mr Liu let us ( pass) the homework to (him).But I didn't (do) the homework yesterday.And the monitor (told) it to Mr Liu.I was very nervous when Mr Liu was (talking)to me outside the classroom.He (didn't criticize me anything) .He only (only told a funny story)to me .And I was very regretted.
This is my favorite teacher,How great he is!(觉得这个结尾有点生硬,伟大应该不容易看出来吧,和蔼还差不多）
我写个结尾.
（He is my favourite teacher.How kind he is!)
我括号里的是给你改 的 想的还不错,但是语法错误还是多的,自己注意.我的供你参考呵呵.

mdeium school 这个不好，并且拼写有错误。 初中基本上都是表达成--- Junior high school
第四行（有个小小的时态错误）-- never have forgetten .
第五行－－a student of grade six.
第六行－ 上交作业通常说法为－－－hand in the homework ( to him)

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mdeium school 这个不好，并且拼写有错误。 初中基本上都是表达成--- Junior high school
第四行（有个小小的时态错误）-- never have forgetten .
第五行－－a student of grade six.
第六行－ 上交作业通常说法为－－－hand in the homework ( to him)
这里要用宾语哦
ButI didn't do the ....( 你原文里多了一个to）
第八行－－He wasn't criticiaed anything strictly. 这样句子结构能够更清晰
tell a funny story to me．only 后面动词用原形哦，单词也有小小的拼写错误，是你打字失误了吧呵呵
总的来说，作为一个初一的学生，这文章已经写的不错啦～～～

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The math teacher
Mr Liu was my math teacher when I was in a primary school. He is knowledgeable and friendly and very kind.
How time flies! Now I am studying in a mdeium school(middle). And...

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The math teacher
Mr Liu was my math teacher when I was in a primary school. He is knowledgeable and friendly and very kind.
How time flies! Now I am studying in a mdeium school(middle). And i never have forget he. (I have never forgotten him)
When I became a grade six student, I was very lazy And I often forget to do my homework. One day, Mr Liu let us pass the homework to he(him). But I didn't do the homework . And the monitor reported it to Mr Liu. I was very nervous when Mr Liu talked to me outside the classroom. He wasn't strict criticizing everything .He only told me a funny store(story?) . And I regretted for what I did.
This is my favorite teacher,How great he is!

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