英文简介 本人英语听说能力较好 写作能力较差 可能错误会很多 麻烦帮忙润色和修改一下The excellent teachers,the rich history,extraordinary teaching capacity and international learning atmosphere attract me so much tha

英文简介 本人英语听说能力较好 写作能力较差 可能错误会很多 麻烦帮忙润色和修改一下The excellent teachers,the rich history,extraordinary teaching capacity and international learning atmosphere attract me so much tha
英文简介
本人英语听说能力较好 写作能力较差 可能错误会很多 麻烦帮忙润色和修改一下
The excellent teachers,the rich history,extraordinary teaching capacity and international learning atmosphere attract me so much that I decide to apply for HKU.As for the major,I am always interested in how to run a company successfully and how to be rich,so I read a lot about spledid enterprisers.As the world biggest developing country ,China has a great number of companis need to know how to make it business big.As a result,China is lack of people who study in AC .And at the same time I can understand the market well.So I choose AC as my first will.During the time I study in university I believe that HKU will give me an penetrative eyesight,and develop my ability in organization and leadership.I think the HKU is one of the best ways which lead me to a wider future.
Thanks you for your valuable patience and time.

英文简介 本人英语听说能力较好 写作能力较差 可能错误会很多 麻烦帮忙润色和修改一下The excellent teachers,the rich history,extraordinary teaching capacity and international learning atmosphere attract me so much tha
I decide to apply for HKU because of many reasons,such as the excellent teachers,the rich history,extraordinary teaching capacity and international learning atmosphere.As for the major,I am always interested in how to run a company successfully and how to be rich.In the meantime,I have read a lot about splendid enterprisers's expetiences.As the world biggest developing country ,China has a great number of companis which need to know how to develop their business bigger and higger.However,China is lack of people who study in AC.I know the needs of the market very well,So I choose AC as my first will.If I can study in university I believe that HKU will give me an penetrative eyesight,and develop my ability in management and leadership.I think HKU is one of the best choices which lead me to a better future.
Thanks you for your valuable patience and time.

spledid 这个单词对吗？

实在没法该, 你还是把你想说的用中文写出来, 再请人翻译吧。
AC 是什么？