我想去参加英语故事比赛,已经背好了故事可是不知道可以在那些话上有动作和表情.Peter joined the army when he was eighteen,and for several months he was taught how to be a good soldier.He did quite well in everything exc

我想去参加英语故事比赛,已经背好了故事可是不知道可以在那些话上有动作和表情.Peter joined the army when he was eighteen,and for several months he was taught how to be a good soldier.He did quite well in everything exc
我想去参加英语故事比赛,已经背好了故事可是不知道可以在那些话上有动作和表情.
Peter joined the army when he was eighteen,and for several months he was taught how to be a good soldier.He did quite well in everything except shooting.One day he and his friends were practicing their shooting,and all of them were doing quite well except Peter.After he had shot at the target nine times and had not hit it once,the officer who was trying to teach the young soldiers to shoot said,"You're quite hopeless,Peter!Don't waste your last bullet too!Go behind that wall and shoot yourself with it!"
Peter felt ashamed.He went behind the wall,and a few seconds later the officer and the other young soldiers heard the sound of a shot.
"Heavens!" the officer said."Has that silly man really shot himself"
He ran behind the wall anxiously,but Peter was all right."I'm sorry,sir," he said,"but I missed again."
彼得十八岁那年参了军,他需要参加几个月的学习以成为一名好士兵.彼得在其他方面都做得很好,但是射击不行.一天他和伙伴们练习射击,除了彼得其他人都没有问题.他射了九次,一次也没有命中目标.这时,教新兵射击的教官说：“彼得,你看来是没希望了,不要连最后一发子弹都浪费掉!去那堵墙后面用它向自己打一枪吧.”
彼得感到非常惭愧.他走到那堵墙后面.几分钟后,教官和新兵们听到一声枪响.
“上帝!”教官叫起来,“难道那个笨蛋真的朝自己开枪了?”
他急忙跑到那堵墙后面,发现彼得安然无恙.“对不起,长官,”他说,“我还是没有命中.”

我想去参加英语故事比赛,已经背好了故事可是不知道可以在那些话上有动作和表情.Peter joined the army when he was eighteen,and for several months he was taught how to be a good soldier.He did quite well in everything exc
动作就算设计好也要看你适不适合做的.如果你是个活泼的孩子倒还可以考虑~~~个人觉得语气才最重要,动作适量就可以了,省得多余
想搞笑点 可以在一开始说到彼特参军了 就敬礼 环视四周~但是不知道你的表情能不能做得到位...
可以在数字上比划...一天之类的（虽然有点俗气）
他射了九次 这里可以提高分贝
教官第一次说的话可以用失望加愤怒的语气 低吼样
peter感到非常惭愧 可以用伤心的语气
"Heavens!" the officer said. "Has that silly man really shot himself"这里当然要提高音量,惊呼貌 可以手撑着演讲台撑高身体做拍桌子样~
最后 可以加个语气词“啊哦,”在"I'm sorry, sir," 之前 动作为╮(╯_╰)╭ 加耸肩