帮我看看啊,下面的日记有没有错误,Today is tree planting day,mom and dad and I went to the park to plant trees,I first and mother with holes,then I'll be the tree in the hole,mother to fill,and father go to carry water to water the trees
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帮我看看啊,下面的日记有没有错误,Today is tree planting day,mom and dad and I went to the park to plant trees,I first and mother with holes,then I'll be the tree in the hole,mother to fill,and father go to carry water to water the trees
帮我看看啊,下面的日记有没有错误,
Today is tree planting day,mom and dad and I went to the park to plant trees,I first and mother with holes,then I'll be the tree in the hole,mother to fill,and father go to carry water to water the trees.
帮我看看啊,下面的日记有没有错误,Today is tree planting day,mom and dad and I went to the park to plant trees,I first and mother with holes,then I'll be the tree in the hole,mother to fill,and father go to carry water to water the trees
Tree Planting Day植树节,每个单词首字母应大写；Mom and Dad ,爸爸妈妈首字母也要大写；First,mom and i dug holes（首先,我跟妈妈先挖坑）,不要写成I and Mom；then I put the tree in the hole（然后我把树苗放在坑里）,要用put表示“放”这个动作,不能用be；Mom filled the hole with soil（妈妈用土填坑）；and father went to carry water to water them不要用go,如果是一般现在时,也应该是goes,但因你描述这件事情的时候,这一切事情已经过去了,所以通篇除了开头用一般现在时以外,其余都应该使用一般过去时,这儿应该是went.
正Today is Tree Planting Day , mother,father and I go to the park to plant trees.First,I dig(挖）holes with mother,then I put the trees in the holes, and mother fills the holes with soil(土）,finally father goes to carry water to water the trees.
Today was tree planting day.My parents and I went to the park to plant trees.At
first,I digged a hole with my mother.Then we put a tree in the hole.At last,my father carrid some water to water the trees.