这几个英语句子语法错在哪里?搞不懂1.Becauseof people are bombarded with various advertisements,so they sometimes find ithard to decide which product to buy.2.Inmany countries,traditional foods being replaced by international fast foods

这几个英语句子语法错在哪里?搞不懂1.Becauseof people are bombarded with various advertisements,so they sometimes find ithard to decide which product to buy.2.Inmany countries,traditional foods being replaced by international fast foods
这几个英语句子语法错在哪里?搞不懂
1.Becauseof people are bombarded with various advertisements,so they sometimes find ithard to decide which product to buy.
2.Inmany countries,traditional foods being replaced by international fast foodsnow.
3.Youngchildren are very difficult to cope with so much homework.
4.Some employersfocus on academic qualifications; pay less attention to life experiences andpersonal qualities.

这几个英语句子语法错在哪里?搞不懂1.Becauseof people are bombarded with various advertisements,so they sometimes find ithard to decide which product to buy.2.Inmany countries,traditional foods being replaced by international fast foods


because 和 so 一般不同时出现在在一个句子里,而且because of 后面不能跟句子.
所以把because of 去掉
变成：people are bombarded with various advertisements,so they sometimes find it hard to decide which product to buy.
being前面要加are,be being done 现在进行时的被动语态
变成：In many countries,traditional foods are being replaced by international fast food snow.
逻辑上的错误,主语应该是to cope with so much homework,用it来做形式主语
变成：It's very difficult for young children to cope with so much homework.
pay改为paying,现在分词短语做状语
变成：Some employers focus on academic qualifications,paying less attention to life experiences and personal qualities.

1. because 和 so不能同时出现,把so删去

2. 应该为foods are being replaced

3. 主语不应为应该为Youngchildren，应该为It is difficult for young children to cope with so much homework.

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   1. because 和 so不能同时出现,把so删去

   2. 应该为foods are being replaced

   3. 主语不应为应该为Youngchildren，应该为It is difficult for young children to cope with so much homework.

   4. 应该为Some employersfocus on academic qualifications; paying less attention to life experiences andpersonal qualities.

   
   

   
   

   望采纳！谢谢~

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   1. because 和so 不能连用。用because of 连句子更错了。去掉一个就好了。

   2. are being .少关键的谓语动词。

   3. 结构错了，要用it is very difficult for young children to ...

   4. pay 的前面要加个连词，比如but, whil...

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      1. because 和so 不能连用。用because of 连句子更错了。去掉一个就好了。

      2. are being .少关键的谓语动词。

      3. 结构错了，要用it is very difficult for young children to ...

      4. pay 的前面要加个连词，比如but, while,另外后面不需要用比较级，用litte attention 就行了。
         

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      1.去掉of 2.being 改为are 3.with 改为 do 4.experiences 去掉s

      1. 应该为because

      2. 没有谓语being直接改为are

      3. be difficult to 这个主语不可以是人，应该是something isdifficult 铜do

      4. focus on与后面的pay 这个应该是双谓语了吧。。应该改为some employers who focus on.....

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         1. 应该为because

         2. 没有谓语being直接改为are

         3. be difficult to 这个主语不可以是人，应该是something isdifficult 铜do

         4. focus on与后面的pay 这个应该是双谓语了吧。。应该改为some employers who focus on......

            以上我自己的看法......

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