英语作文,帮忙检查一下有没有语法错误!My dream houseI always think about my dream house.My dream house would be located on the seashore,so that I could wake up and go bed with the melody of the waves.The house would has at least 2 floo

英语作文,帮忙检查一下有没有语法错误!My dream houseI always think about my dream house.My dream house would be located on the seashore,so that I could wake up and go bed with the melody of the waves.The house would has at least 2 floo
英语作文,帮忙检查一下有没有语法错误!
My dream house
I always think about my dream house.My dream house would be located on the seashore,so that I could wake up and go bed with the melody of the waves.The house would has at least 2 floors.There would be a big hall on the first floor,and there would be a living room on the left side while the right side would be the reading room.I would have four bedroom and a bathroom so that I could invite my friends to spend holiday in my dream house.
What’s more,there would be a basketball court in front of my house.A beautiful garden which has many flowers and vegetables would be behind the house.In the summer ,I could sit under the tree with my family.
That’s my dream house.I hope my dream will come true one day.

英语作文,帮忙检查一下有没有语法错误!My dream houseI always think about my dream house.My dream house would be located on the seashore,so that I could wake up and go bed with the melody of the waves.The house would has at least 2 floo
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1.be located at/locate in
2.'so that I can wake up and go bed with the melody of the waves' can在此处作实意动词,could是它的过去式,二者只有为虚拟语气时才能互换.
3.melody 一般指乐曲,不指代自然节奏,不如换用rhythm
4.The house would has at least 2 floors.此句不通,情态动词后应为动词的原形不说,would have done指本应该,用法错误.the house may have at least two floors
5.There would be a big hall on the first floor,and there would be a living room on the left side while the right side would be the reading room./I would have four bedroom and a bathroom so that I could invite my friends to spend holiday in my dream house/there would be a basketball court in front of my house/ A beautiful garden which has many flowers and vegetables would be behind the house,I could sit under the tree with my family.
.此举错误同理,如果想使用“将要”的意思,只用will就行了,would是虚拟语气时才能用的.can和could同理.
6.最后一句从语法上来看没问题,但还是小小吐槽一下：可以用wish that的虚拟语气,高级一点