谁能帮我检查一下这篇英语小作文有什么语法错误…谢谢!
来源：学生作业帮助网 编辑：六六作业网 时间：2024/12/23 17:52:13
谁能帮我检查一下这篇英语小作文有什么语法错误…谢谢!
谁能帮我检查一下这篇英语小作文有什么语法错误…谢谢!
谁能帮我检查一下这篇英语小作文有什么语法错误…谢谢!
1 He went climb with ``` went climbing
2 He visited his friend —— Bod ,看得出你本来也想同逗号 的确是该用逗号 ,英语里没那样同破折号的
3 He went to swim 改成 went swimming 好一点 惯用
4 The comedy is very interesting 你前面都会用 watched TV 了 为什么这里的喜剧很搞笑就不会用 过去式呢 was very interesting
大概就这样了 至于作文好不好的话 我就不评论了 语法上基本上就上面的问题
第一个地方：went climb，两个动词放一起，不对，要么是改成to climb要么改成climbing；
It was very tired for him，没有这样说的，直接就是he was very tired！；
After breakfast，最好改成after having breakfast。吃过早饭后，
The comedy is very interes...
全部展开
第一个地方：went climb，两个动词放一起，不对，要么是改成to climb要么改成climbing；
It was very tired for him，没有这样说的，直接就是he was very tired！；
After breakfast，最好改成after having breakfast。吃过早饭后，
The comedy is very interesting。最好用过去式！
收起
went climb ----went climbing family---families ，最后一句is---was ,大的语法错误倒没有时态基本上正确，就是写得太生硬了，少了些连接词，如then , but,for a while 等，加上连接词会让文章更连贯自然。