帮忙找错误：有关今天的英语日记时态英语丢了2年,现在想检起来,单词,语法都忘得差不多了,帮忙看下语法,不对的地方请帮忙指出来,October 9,2007 Tuesday,FineToday is Tuesday.I got up at 7:40 in the morning

帮忙找错误：有关今天的英语日记时态英语丢了2年,现在想检起来,单词,语法都忘得差不多了,帮忙看下语法,不对的地方请帮忙指出来,October 9,2007 Tuesday,FineToday is Tuesday.I got up at 7:40 in the morning
帮忙找错误：有关今天的英语日记时态
英语丢了2年,现在想检起来,单词,语法都忘得差不多了,帮忙看下语法,不对的地方请帮忙指出来,
October 9,2007 Tuesday,Fine
Today is Tuesday.I got up at 7:40 in the morning then i washed my clothing with soap.I bought a piece of bread at the market when i washed my clothing.I felt a little cold all the way.Maybe the weather would be changed.In my space time i read friends' work plan.I leared a lot from the play.At the time i though my status.
I felt blind,like a fly has no head.I know i must understand myself and know what i want ...I image a lot at the same time...I don't know why...
In the afternoon i have a lot of space time.And i learned ten new words(It is my assignment from now on.)I wrote a diary and i have no any words in my mind.I forgot the format,forgot the words,forgot how to expression.I drop it two years ago.And now i want to pick it up.OK,let begin...Just all
Please help me check the wrong sentence,thanks very much.

帮忙找错误：有关今天的英语日记时态英语丢了2年,现在想检起来,单词,语法都忘得差不多了,帮忙看下语法,不对的地方请帮忙指出来,October 9,2007 Tuesday,FineToday is Tuesday.I got up at 7:40 in the morning
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October 9,2007 Tuesday,Fine
Today is Tuesday.I got up at 7:40 in the morning then I washed my clothing with soap.I bought a piece of bread at the market when the clothing was being washed.I felt a little cold all the way.Maybe the weather changed.In my spare time i read friends' work plan.I learned a lot from the play.At the time i thought my status.
I felt blind,like a fly who has no head.I know i must understand myself and know what i want ...I think a lot at the same time...I don't know why...
In the afternoon i have a lot of spare time.And i learned ten new words(It is my assignment from now on.)I wrote a diary and i don't have any words in my mind.I forgot the format,forgot the words,forgot how to express.I dropped it two years ago.And now i want to pick it up.OK,let begin...Just all
Please help me check the wrong sentences,thanks very much.
错误还真多啊.基本上保持了原句意思,略有改动吧...I 都要大写

I bought a piece of bread at the market when i washed my clothing.这里用after比较好，因为你不能正在洗衣服的时候买面包去呀～
Maybe the weather would be changed. 这里不用被动就行，因为你能说出被动的主语吗？
At the time i though my status. 应该是...

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I bought a piece of bread at the market when i washed my clothing.这里用after比较好，因为你不能正在洗衣服的时候买面包去呀～
Maybe the weather would be changed. 这里不用被动就行，因为你能说出被动的主语吗？
At the time i though my status. 应该是thought 吧，另外思考考虑用think about
I wrote a diary and i have no any words in my mind.这里用not any或者none就可以表达没有一个词的意思了。
I drop it two years ago.drop用过去时
let begin...中间应该有个主语，否则两个动词直接连接了，有问题的
Just all 就这些了用That's all.

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