英语作文..语法错误 或者单词拼写错误帮忙查一下In most people's memories,vampire is a kind of animal which is grace but bloody.They can live for a really long time ,maybe even immortal.They are beautiful ,and they have formidable _

英语作文..语法错误 或者单词拼写错误帮忙查一下In most people's memories,vampire is a kind of animal which is grace but bloody.They can live for a really long time ,maybe even immortal.They are beautiful ,and they have formidable _
英语作文..语法错误 或者单词拼写错误帮忙查一下
In most people's memories,vampire is a kind of animal which is grace but bloody.They can live for a really long time ,maybe even immortal.They are beautiful ,and they have formidable __(自我修复能力)__.
But I don't care about these things.I pay my attention to theirs teeth.Each of them have two laniaries in their mouse.They are pointed,so they can pierce into people's skin to drink blood.But,imagine that,a vampire teethe its laniaries in a wrong place——in the front of the mouse,just like a rabbit,how funny it will be!Then ,maybe that vampire feels unhappy because of its laniaries,so it goes to see the dendist,and starts to wear a tooth socket.Oh~I think no one would like to give any blood to him.

英语作文..语法错误 或者单词拼写错误帮忙查一下In most people's memories,vampire is a kind of animal which is grace but bloody.They can live for a really long time ,maybe even immortal.They are beautiful ,and they have formidable _
In most people's memories,(+the) vampire is a kind of animal which is grace but bloody.They can live for a really long time ,maybe even immortal.They are beautiful ,and they have formidable __(自我修复能力)__.
But I don't care about(换for) these things.I pay my attention to theirs(-s) teeth.Each of them have(改为has) two laniaries(换为canine teeth） in their mouse.(+s） They are pointed,so they can pierce into people's skin to drink blood.But,imagine that,a vampire teethe its laniaries (去掉its laniaries ）in a wrong place——in the front of the mouse,just like a rabbit,how funny it will be!Then ,maybe that vampire feels unhappy because of its laniaries(换为canine teeth）,so it goes to see the dendist,and starts to wear a tooth socket.Oh~I think no one would like to give any blood to him.

each of ……后应用has，然后animal＋s

首先，animal要用复数，加s.

Self-repairing ability自我修复能力
theirs teeth---their teeth 名词性物主代词=形容词性物主代词+名词
a vampire teethe its laniaries in a wrong place ---a vampire who has a disorderly teeth
仅供参考。。。

第三段，the family the career ,都把the 去掉，第四段，female sailor 忍不住做了个同题作文，我也是（这只是本人的意见——英语专业研究