帮我修改一下英文作文"关于童年"原文意思不能变,挑出病句.方法：先找出病句,然后修改,并简要说明错在哪.最后可以批评我一下,指出不足.我会虚心接受,A Memory Of My ChildhoodAll my memories of my ch

帮我修改一下英文作文"关于童年"原文意思不能变,挑出病句.方法：先找出病句,然后修改,并简要说明错在哪.最后可以批评我一下,指出不足.我会虚心接受,A Memory Of My ChildhoodAll my memories of my ch
帮我修改一下英文作文"关于童年"
原文意思不能变,挑出病句.
方法：先找出病句,然后修改,并简要说明错在哪.
最后可以批评我一下,指出不足.我会虚心接受,
A Memory Of My Childhood
All my memories of my childhood gather round my grandparents .When I was growing up they are always with me .they love me even though I was a little demon .They taught me how to be a good man ,and my grandmother sometimes told stories to me when I went to bed for a sleep.Then when morning came they often bought a good breakfast for me,and I enjoy my childhood every minute.
One day morning they took me to the countryside by train when I was seven years old .We went to a village which is their hometown .On the way to the country ,it was hot outside because it was summer ,but I was very excited because I had never travelled on a train before .I sat near the window and sang songs ,soon I began to feel happier.Then we got off the train and walked for a time .Finally we arrived.For the first time I saw lots of beautiful mountains and hills .After a while ,I could see a village near a wood.”Here we are!” My grandfather said happily,I found a smile on his face .After we had had lunch ,I went out for pleasure.I walked without a shoe ,went down the country roads under the blue sky .
By tomorrow afternoon my grandfather took me out and went into the wood.”Let’s go and take a walk,my boy,” said my grandfather.“Are you feeling hot?”He asked me.”Yes,I am!”my mouth open.And then he asked me,”Do you like swimming?” ’Yes ,of course I do!’I answered.Then he smiled and took me walked past lots of beautiful trees .In fact ,there are trees everywhere.At last we stopped.Suddenly I saw a small pool in front of me ,the water is clear .I got very happy,andI had a fantastic time swimming with my grandfather.
‘Where did you go?’my grandmother questioned us when we came .’It’s a secret.’ I answered and laughed.My grandfather began to laugh ,too.
In the evening we had wonderful dinner.
For weeks.Some days I went out for pleasure ,some days I played inside with pigs and ducks.But I always helped my grandprents made a fire for cook supper.
we lived happily in our country .
In conclusion,I like country life because I can living without vexation.

帮我修改一下英文作文"关于童年"原文意思不能变,挑出病句.方法：先找出病句,然后修改,并简要说明错在哪.最后可以批评我一下,指出不足.我会虚心接受,A Memory Of My ChildhoodAll my memories of my ch
A Memory Of My Childhood
All of my memories of my childhood gather round my grandparents .When I was growing up they were always with me .they loved me even though I was a little demon .They taught me how to be a good man ,and my grandmother sometimes told stories to me when I went to bed for a sleep.Then when morning came they often bought a good breakfast for me,and I enjoy my childhood every minute.
One day morning they took me to the countryside by train when I was seven years old .We went to a village,their hometown .On the way to the country ,it was hot outside because it was summer ,but I was very excited because I had never travelled on a train before .I sat near the window and sang songs ,soon I began to feel happier.Then we got off the train and walked for a time .Finally we arrived.it was the first time I saw lots of beautiful mountains and hills .After a while ,I could see a village near a wood.”Here we are!” My grandfather said happily,I found a smile on his face .After we had had lunch ,I went out for pleasure.I walked barefeetedly and went down the country roads under the blue sky .
By tomorrow afternoon my grandfather took me out and went into the wood.”Let’s go and take a walk,my boy,” said my grandfather.“Are you feeling hot?”He asked me.”Yes,I am!”I answered.And then he asked me,”Do you like swimming?” ’Yes ,of course I do!’I answered.Then he smiled and took me walking past lots of beautiful trees .In fact ,there were trees everywhere.At last we stopped.Suddenly I saw a small pool in front of me ,the water is clear .I got very happy,andI had a fantastic time swimming with my grandfather.
‘Where did you go?’my grandmother questioned us when we came .’It’s a secret.’ I answered laughing .My grandfather began to laugh ,too.
In the evening we had wonderful dinner.
For weeks.Some days I went out for pleasure ,some days I played with pigs and ducks.But I always helped my grandprents made a fire for supper.
we lived happily in our country .
In conclusion,I like country life because I can live without vexation!