一篇英文写作,请英文好的朋友帮我修改一下.According to the latest data from theMinistry of Water Resources of P.R China,there are more than 600 varioussized cities.More than 400 of them are lack of water,thereof 108 cities arewith se

一篇英文写作,请英文好的朋友帮我修改一下.According to the latest data from theMinistry of Water Resources of P.R China,there are more than 600 varioussized cities.More than 400 of them are lack of water,thereof 108 cities arewith se
一篇英文写作,请英文好的朋友帮我修改一下.
According to the latest data from theMinistry of Water Resources of P.R China,there are more than 600 varioussized cities.More than 400 of them are lack of water,thereof 108 cities arewith serious situation of water shortage.Besides the cities,the watershortage have been starting occurrence in the broad rural area.
The river annual runoff amount in ourcountry is 2.7 trillion cubic meters,it is sixth in the world.It belongs to acountry which is rich in water resources in the world.But time distributionand spatial distribution of water resources are seriously uneven.From theregional distribution,the water of the Eastern is more than the westerns andthe Sothern’s is more than the northing’s.
In addition to specific geographicalconditions and weather conditions,water shortage is intensified as a result ofeconomic growth,population increase,and expansion of development andconstruction activities and ineffective protection of natural resourcesthroughout Chinese Mainland.
Development and utilization of rivers haveexceeded 30%-40% of International Ecological Warning Line and ecological wateris occupied in such a large amount that over-exploitation underground water andman-made sabotage of water resources take place in urban and rural areas.

一篇英文写作,请英文好的朋友帮我修改一下.According to the latest data from theMinistry of Water Resources of P.R China,there are more than 600 varioussized cities.More than 400 of them are lack of water,thereof 108 cities arewith se
1.According to the latest data from the Ministry of Water Resources of P.R China,there are more than 600 various sized cities.你想表达不同大小的城市么?那么就说“600 cities of various sizes”
2.More than 400 of them are lack of water,thereof 108 cities arewith serious situation of water shortage.Besides the cities,the watershortage have been starting occurrence in the broad rural area.
这部分错误蛮多的.首先 lack的用法,如果直接用作动词的话 就是“More than 400 of them lack water.”就可以了.后面一句你是想说缺水问题已经开始在广大乡村地区产生了对吧,注意单复数,改成“the watershortage has occurred in...” 简单点吧.
3.The river annual runoff amount in our country is 2.7 trillion cubic meters,it is sixth in the world.修改：The annual river runoff amount in our country is ...It ranks the sixth in the world.

the Ministry.....More than 400 of them are lacking of water, among which 108 are with serious water shortage.
Other than the cities, water shortage have been starting to occur in the vast rural ar...

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the Ministry.....More than 400 of them are lacking of water, among which 108 are with serious water shortage.
Other than the cities, water shortage have been starting to occur in the vast rural areas.
The annual river runoff amount in our country, which is rich in water resources, is 2.7 trillion cubic meters, placed sixth in the world.
However, the distributions of the time and the location of the rain are seriously uneven.
The regional distribution of rain is greater in the Eastern part of our country than the the Western part, and greater in the Southern than in the Northern part.
geographical conditions.... of economic growth... and construction activities.... natural resources throughout Mainland China.
have exceeded by 30 to 40% beyong the International Ecological Warning Line.
ecological water is of such a large amount that over-expolition of underground water and anthropological sabotage of water resources take place everywhere, from the urban to the rural areas.

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According to the latest figures show that China has more than 600 different sizes of urban water shortage. More than 400 cities is the lack of water, of which 400 severe water shortages. In addition t...

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According to the latest figures show that China has more than 600 different sizes of urban water shortage. More than 400 cities is the lack of water, of which 400 severe water shortages. In addition to these cities, water shortages are already starting to appear in the vast rural areas.
River annual runoff volume is 2.7 trillion cubic meters in our country, is the sixth in the world, and it belongs to the world's water resources are rich in rich countries. But in fact space seriously uneven distribution of water resources. From the point of view of regional distribution, the east than the west water more, more than in the north of water in the south.
In mainland China in addition to the specific geographical environment and weather conditions, water resources shortage is exacerbated due to economic growth, population increase and expand the development and construction activities, and the result of ineffective protection of natural resources.译为根据最新的数据显示，中国有600多个不同大小的城市水资源短缺。超过400个城市是缺水,其中108个城市出现严重缺水的情况。除了这些城市,水资源短缺已经开始出现在广大的农村地区。
河年径流总量在我国是2.7万亿立方米,是世界上第六个，它属于世界的水资源富含丰富的国家。但是实际上空间分布严重不均匀的水资源。从区域性分布上看,东部比西部的水多，南部的比北部的水要多。
中国大陆除了特定的地理环境和天气条件下,水资源短缺加剧是由于经济增长、人口增加、扩大开发建设活动和无效的保护自然资源导致的。
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