帮我修改一篇英文稿子,关于经济危机.WE ARE READY FOR FACING ECONOMIC CRISIS Good evening! Ladies and gentlemen. Today,I would like to begin with a story. The story of Jamal Malik, an 18 year-old boy from the slums of Mumbai, who is abou

帮我修改一篇英文稿子,关于经济危机.WE ARE READY FOR FACING ECONOMIC CRISIS Good evening! Ladies and gentlemen. Today,I would like to begin with a story. The story of Jamal Malik, an 18 year-old boy from the slums of Mumbai, who is abou
帮我修改一篇英文稿子,关于经济危机.
WE ARE READY FOR FACING ECONOMIC CRISIS
Good evening! Ladies and gentlemen. Today,I would like to begin with a story.
The story of Jamal Malik, an 18 year-old boy from the slums of Mumbai, who is about to experience the biggest day of his life. With the whole nation watching, he is just one question away from winning a staggering 20 million rupees on India's "Who Wants To Be A Millionaire?"
Yes,that situation appeared in the movie "Millionaire" which was the best film in the 81st Oscar's Awards. Now, if someone wanna ask me why do you talk about that ,I would answer through a question, do you wanna be a millionaire ?
Yes? Alright.
But now, millionaire has been more far away from you .
The economic crisis affected the entire world. Thousands of factories closed in southern China, over 20 million migrant workers lost jobs and at least 6 million students were trying to enter the workforce in just a few months, add to that makes millions more already out of work or failing to find jobs and China’s unemployment rate is set to worsen amid the sharp global economic downturn.
Today's college students are facing choices unheard of years ago. Terms like two way selection, self-employment are not new to them. Many students swarm into labor market or look every talent fair for potential employers. The concept of selling oneself rather than hiding oneself is well accepted by students.
Hunting a job is not a small matter. Instead, it is probably one of the most important things, if not the most, important decisions any of would-be graduates can make in a lifetime. Therefore, they are very serious and cautious when that time comes. It is something that the society has taught them.
What we can do this time? We are ready for facing economic crisis .
By this time, frugal financial management is also a kind of way of life, always in the details. Less able to spend less money to spend, be able to cook at dining hall do not eat at the hotel. Be able to buy stores, discount supermarket, the special price of conventional products that do not buy the product. Will not be able to send text messages on the phone.
Is not simply to save money clutching his wallet at no cost, but let money more efficiently, with the least money to meet our greatest desire.
Although we meet difficulties, but there are so many people meet big difficulties too, so we should encourage ourselves, keep doing our work best, and try to study some new knowledges, prepare for everything might be come in future!

帮我修改一篇英文稿子,关于经济危机.WE ARE READY FOR FACING ECONOMIC CRISIS Good evening! Ladies and gentlemen. Today,I would like to begin with a story. The story of Jamal Malik, an 18 year-old boy from the slums of Mumbai, who is abou
Good evening! Ladies and gentlemen. Today,I would like to begin with a story.
This story is about Jamal Malik, an 18 year-old boy from the slums of Mumbai, who is about to experience the biggest day of his life. Watched by the whole nation, he is just one question away from winning a staggering 20 million rupees on India's "Who Wants To Be A Millionaire?"
Yes,that situation appeared in the movie "Millionaire" which was the best film in the 81st Oscar's Awards. Now, if someone wanna ask me why do you talk about that ,I would answer it with a question, do you wanna be a millionaire ?
Yes? Alright.
But now, millionaire has been more far away from you .
The economic crisis affected the entire world. Thousands of factories in southern China closed, over 20 million migrant workers lost jobs and at least 6 million students were trying to enter the workforce within just a few months, which makes millions of people who lose jobs more difficult to take up an occupation and rate of Chinese unemployment is set to worsen amid the sharp global economic downturn.
Today, college students are facing difficult choices, which were unheard before. Terms like two way selection, self-employment are not new to them. Many students swarm into labor market or look every market of human resources for potential employers. The concept of selling oneself rather than hiding is well accepted by students.
Hunting a job is not a simple matter. Instead, it is probably one of the most important things, if not the most, it is an important decision that any of would-be graduates will make in a lifetime. Therefore, they are very serious and cautious when it comes. It is something that the society has taught them.
What can we do this time? We are ready to face economic crisis .
This time, frugal financial management is also a of way of life, always in details. Less able to spend means less money to spend, if you are able to cook at dining hall then there’s no need for you to eat at the hotel. If you are able to buy stores in discount supermarket and the special price of conventional products you needn’t buy the product. Will not be able to send text messages on the phone.
Is not simple to save money by clutching his wallet with no cost, but let money more efficiently, with the least money to meet our greatest desire.
Not only we meet difficulties, there are also many people meet big difficulties too, so we should encourage ourselves and keep doing our work best, and try to study some new knowledge preparing for everything might be come in future!
从句是要放在一个主谓完整的句子中的
一个句子如果有两个小分句,这两个小分句要用连词连接
避免一些chinglish的表达
疑问句要注意主谓倒装

WE ARE READY FOR FACING ECONOMIC CRISIS
Good evening! Ladies and gentlemen. Today,I would like to begin with a story.
The story of Jamal Malik, an 18 year-old boy from the slums of Mumbai, w...

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WE ARE READY FOR FACING ECONOMIC CRISIS
Good evening! Ladies and gentlemen. Today,I would like to begin with a story.
The story of Jamal Malik, an 18 year-old boy from the slums of Mumbai, who is about to experience the biggest day of his life. With the whole nation watching, he is just one question away from winning a staggering 20 million rupees on India's "Who Wants To Be A Millionaire?"
Yes,that situation appeared in the movie "Millionaire" which was the best film in the 81st Oscar's Awards. Now, if someone wanna ask me why do you talk about that ,I would answer through a question, do you wanna be a millionaire ?
Yes? Alright.
But now, millionaire has been more far away from you .
The economic crisis affected the entire world. Thousands of factories closed in southern China, over 20 million migrant workers lost jobs and at least 6 million students were trying to enter the workforce in just a few months, add to that makes millions more already out of work or failing to find jobs and China’s unemployment rate is set to worsen amid the sharp global economic downturn.
Today's college students are facing choices unheard of years ago. Terms like two way selection, self-employment are not new to them. Many students swarm into labor market or look every talent fair for potential employers. The concept of selling oneself rather than hiding oneself is well accepted by students.
Hunting a job is not a small matter. Instead, it is probably one of the most important things, if not the most, important decisions any of would-be graduates can make in a lifetime. Therefore, they are very serious and cautious when that time comes. It is something that the society has taught them.
What we can do this time? We are ready for facing economic crisis .
By this time, frugal financial management is also a kind of way of life, always in the details. Less able to spend less money to spend, be able to cook at dining hall do not eat at the hotel. Be able to buy stores, discount supermarket, the special price of conventional products that do not buy the product. Will not be able to send text messages on the phone.
Is not simply to save money clutching his wallet at no cost, but let money more efficiently, with the least money to meet our greatest desire.
Although we meet difficulties, but there are so many people meet big difficulties too, so we should encourage ourselves, keep doing our work best, and try to study some new knowledges, prepare for everything might be come in future!

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