my last school trip(三篇.有要求)My Last School Trip(1)I had a pleasant school trip last weekend._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

my last school trip(三篇.有要求)My Last School Trip(1)I had a pleasant school trip last weekend._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
my last school trip(三篇.有要求)
My Last School Trip(1)
I had a pleasant school trip last weekend.________________________
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My Last School Trip(2)
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
So we had a terrible school trip.
My Last School Trip(3)
_________________________________________________________________________________________________but luckily,___________________________
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my last school trip(三篇.有要求)My Last School Trip(1)I had a pleasant school trip last weekend._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
My Last School Trip(1)
*I had a pleasant school trip last weekend.* I had been very excited for this trip.We have been to XXX.There was a play field.I played Merry-go-round,roller coaster and so on.I have eaten XXX.It tasted fabulous.
I will remember this memory forever
My Last School Trip(2)
We have been to XXX.I was excited about it and planned a lot.Unfortunatly,there was a typhoon come to XXX,We should stay at the hotel.Watching the boring TV.The planning we had planned,has been canceled.
*So we had a terrible school trip.*
My Last School Trip(3)
We have been to XXX.I was so pleased that I can't fall asleep the night before my lasy school trip.However,XXX was rainy.If it keep raining,we must stay at the hotel.But luckily,two hours later,the sun was shining.I could go out to play!
I had a great fun in XXX
“xxx”代表去的地方（胡乱写就行）

这是要写三篇作文？

作文要结合自己的生活经历来写才能吸引人
我也不提倡抄袭以及代写
不过我是非常乐意给你提些建议的
首先My last school trip从题目上看 是记叙文
从文体性质上看，需要用到的副词类应该是表示时间、地点、次序的
比如at first,then,finally,just at that moment,as soon as,during以及when引导...

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作文要结合自己的生活经历来写才能吸引人
我也不提倡抄袭以及代写
不过我是非常乐意给你提些建议的
首先My last school trip从题目上看 是记叙文
从文体性质上看，需要用到的副词类应该是表示时间、地点、次序的
比如at first,then,finally,just at that moment,as soon as,during以及when引导的状语从句
从记叙事件上看，这是一篇游记，要讲述谁什么时间去什么地方怎么样干什么
事件总是有转折起伏的，所以要用到however,besides,what's more,to make things worse表示转折、顺承的短语，同时引入作者观点
从文章的基调上看，第一篇是“pleasant”,第二篇“terrible”,第三篇中间出现由坏转好的“but luckily”，那么在事件的安排上也要体现出符合这种情绪变化的事件。
适当运用各种从句、强调句、独立主格、with复合结构以及课本中的短语句式，再加上工整漂亮的书写，就已经可以算是篇不错的英语作文了。
祝你学习进步。

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