以My last school trip为题,完成三篇文章0 - 提问时间2009-7-31 09:41 问题为何被关闭 My Last School Trip(1)I had a pleasant school trip last weekend._____________________________________________________________________________________

以My last school trip为题,完成三篇文章0 - 提问时间2009-7-31 09:41 问题为何被关闭 My Last School Trip(1)I had a pleasant school trip last weekend._____________________________________________________________________________________
以My last school trip为题,完成三篇文章
0 - 提问时间2009-7-31 09:41 问题为何被关闭
My Last School Trip(1)
I had a pleasant school trip last weekend.________________________
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My Last School Trip(2)
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So we had a terrible school trip.
My Last School Trip(3)
_________________________________________________________________________________________________but luckily,___________________________
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以My last school trip为题,完成三篇文章0 - 提问时间2009-7-31 09:41 问题为何被关闭 My Last School Trip(1)I had a pleasant school trip last weekend._____________________________________________________________________________________
作文要结合自己的生活经历来写才能吸引人
我也不提倡抄袭以及代写
不过我是非常乐意给你提些建议的
首先My last school trip从题目上看 是记叙文
从文体性质上看,需要用到的副词类应该是表示时间、地点、次序的
比如at first,then,finally,just at that moment,as soon as,during以及when引导的状语从句
从记叙事件上看,这是一篇游记,要讲述谁什么时间去什么地方怎么样干什么
事件总是有转折起伏的,所以要用到however,besides,what's more,to make things worse表示转折、顺承的短语,同时引入作者观点
从文章的基调上看,第一篇是“pleasant”,第二篇“terrible”,第三篇中间出现由坏转好的“but luckily”,那么在事件的安排上也要体现出符合这种情绪变化的事件.
适当运用各种从句、强调句、独立主格、with复合结构以及课本中的短语句式,再加上工整漂亮的书写,就已经可以算是篇不错的英语作文了.