帮我看看这几句英语 写法对吗
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帮我看看这几句英语 写法对吗
帮我看看这几句英语 写法对吗 
帮我看看这几句英语 写法对吗
However,money really can buy happiness?由于是一般疑问句,应将can提到money前
应改为However,can money really buy happiness?
2.个人认为第二句中的problem可改为question【其实无关紧要啦,而且关键在个人怎么理解】
problem和question都有“问题”的意思,但用法却不尽相同：
problem指说话者认为难以解决的问题,它与动词 solve或settle（解决）搭配.而 question指说话者需要寻找答案的问题,它常与动词ask或answer连用.
3.we would say no中的would 最好换成will 因为主将从现和虚拟语气是有区别的【其实也没那么重要吧 不过既然是找错嘛 就按着教科书来吧 其实我觉得用would更好】
4.Will their feel happiness?应改为Will they feel happy?
they 是这句话的主语,feel后面加形容词
5.最后一段above之后是逗号,然后I think 后面直接加祈使句不对 所以I think don’t let your money direct you.最好改为I think you should not let your money direct you.
你初中？
However，can money really purchase happiness? When we consider this question much further, we would know the answer is "no". In order to get money, some people prefer to steal, rob, cheat inst...
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你初中？
However，can money really purchase happiness? When we consider this question much further, we would know the answer is "no". In order to get money, some people prefer to steal, rob, cheat instead of hard working. Some of them lead their way to the cell, others will punished by their own consciences for the rest of their life. Will they feel happy? Hell no. So what Iwant to put forward is that don't let the penny seduce you to the darkness, you should be the owner of your money.
主要不足不是在于语法错误，比如第一句就错了。英语太中式了，一看就是中国人写的，多看看外国人写的东西，句子也好，文章也好，英语的表达思路跟中文不一样，慢慢体会。
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