求修改高中英语作文Last autumn,we all senior 2 students went to suburb to take part in a "learning from farmers"activity.There are lots of wonderful memories during the seven-day trip.Far away from downtown area,the natural scenery made all o

求修改高中英语作文Last autumn,we all senior 2 students went to suburb to take part in a "learning from farmers"activity.There are lots of wonderful memories during the seven-day trip.Far away from downtown area,the natural scenery made all o
求修改高中英语作文
Last autumn,we all senior 2 students went to suburb to take part in a "learning from farmers"activity.There are lots of wonderful memories during the seven-day trip.
Far away from downtown area,the natural scenery made all of us surprised.In the day time,I could see glossy fields as far as the eye could reach and listen to rooster ‘crowing .After sun set,the night sky hung down ,filled with shining stars.In such a wonderful environment,our pressure on study was relieved and our hearts were quite,
With the company of classmates,our daily life was full of happy laughers and cheerful voices.We slept together,ate together and did farm work together,with strengthened our friendships and the understanding to each other.In leisure time,some of us rehearsed our programmes repeatedly which would be played in front of all students and teachers at the evening party in the last night.When the night come,our promgrammes gained applause resounded through the fall.
In a second,these days has been away for a year.But the unforgettable days and nights that we spent together always appear in my mind like a movie.
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求修改高中英语作文Last autumn,we all senior 2 students went to suburb to take part in a "learning from farmers"activity.There are lots of wonderful memories during the seven-day trip.Far away from downtown area,the natural scenery made all o
第四行,listen to 改成hear.因为listen to 强调的是过程,而hear强调的是动作的结果.
第四行,the night sky hung down 不通,可改成the dark sky was gone.
倒数第三行,when the night come改成when the night came.
倒数第三行,gained applause改成won applause.
最后一行,appear改成appears