求修改高中英语作文Last autumn,we all senior 2 students went to suburb to take part in a "learning from farmers"activity.There are lots of wonderful memories during the seven-day trip.Far away from downtown area,the natural scenery made all o

求修改高中英语作文Last autumn,we all senior 2 students went to suburb to take part in a "learning from farmers"activity.There are lots of wonderful memories during the seven-day trip.Far away from downtown area,the natural scenery made all o
求修改高中英语作文
Last autumn,we all senior 2 students went to suburb to take part in a "learning from farmers"activity.There are lots of wonderful memories during the seven-day trip.
Far away from downtown area,the natural scenery made all of us surprised.In the day time,I could see glossy fields as far as the eye could reach and listen to rooster ‘crowing .After sun set,the night sky hung down ,filled with shining stars.In such a wonderful environment,our pressure on study was relieved and our hearts were quite,
With the company of classmates,our daily life was full of happy laughers and cheerful voices.We slept together,ate together and did farm work together,with strengthened our friendships and the understanding to each other.In leisure time,some of us rehearsed our programmes repeatedly which would be played in front of all students and teachers at the evening party in the last night.When the night come,our promgrammes gained applause resounded through the fall.
In a second,these days has been away for a year.But the unforgettable days and nights that we spent together always appear in my mind like a movie.
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求修改高中英语作文Last autumn,we all senior 2 students went to suburb to take part in a "learning from farmers"activity.There are lots of wonderful memories during the seven-day trip.Far away from downtown area,the natural scenery made all o
Last autumn, we senior 2 students all went to suburb to take part in a "learning from farmers"activity.There were a lot of wonderful memories in this seven-day trip.
As we were far away from downtown, the natural scenery made all of us surprised. In the day time, I could see glossy fields as far as the eye could reach and listen to rooster ‘s crowing . After the sunset, the night sky hung dow , filled with shining stars. In such a wonderful environment, our pressure on study was relieved and our hearts were peace.
With the company of classmates, our daily life was full of happy laughters and cheerful voices. We slept together, ate together and did farm work together, we developed our friendships and understanding each other much better. During the leisure time, some of us rehearsed our programmes repeatedly, which would be played in front of all students and teachers at the evening party in the last night of our journey . When the night come, our promgrammes gained much resounding applause.
Time flies, these days has past for a year. But those unforgettable days and nights that we spent together will always appear in my mind like a movie.
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