帮我看看.看我哪儿错了?改一下.谢谢.我急用~Refer to hobby. I have a lot of hobbies. For example reading,singing,traveling and so on. When I singing I feel very cool and enjoy the songs. traveling can let me relax and embrace by mother

帮我看看.看我哪儿错了?改一下.谢谢.我急用~Refer to hobby. I have a lot of hobbies. For example reading,singing,traveling and so on. When I singing I feel very cool and enjoy the songs. traveling can let me relax and embrace by mother
帮我看看.看我哪儿错了?改一下.谢谢.我急用~
Refer to hobby. I have a lot of hobbies. For example reading,singing,traveling and so on. When I singing I feel very cool and enjoy the songs. traveling can let me relax and embrace by mother nature. But I prefer to read. The reason is reading book can let me know lots of things. Books helped me to enlarge the extension of the knowledge. So I think books is my teacher. I like reading books.
4.Introduce your family.
I have a nice family. There has five people in my family. My mother,father,sister husband and I. My mother is little bit overweight.I really love my mother’s cook..and my father is strong. I also have a beautiful sister.she is very cute..When we was yong. we like stickes that always together..eating,sleeping,shopping and so on .we always deal with something. Now I have a nice husband. He is policeman. I am very honor to him.Because he can proect people.

帮我看看.看我哪儿错了?改一下.谢谢.我急用~Refer to hobby. I have a lot of hobbies. For example reading,singing,traveling and so on. When I singing I feel very cool and enjoy the songs. traveling can let me relax and embrace by mother
Refer to hobby.I have a lot of hobbies.Such as reading,singing,traveling and so on.When I singing I feel very cool and enjoy the songs.Traveling can make me relax and embrace by Mother Nature.But I prefer to read.Because reading books can help me know lots of things.Books helped me to enlarge the extension of the knowledge.So I think books are my teacher.I like reading books.
4.Introduce your family.
I have a nice family.There have five people in my family.My mother,my father,my sister’ husband and I.My mother is little bit overweight.I really love my mother’s cook.And my father is strong.I also have a beautiful sister.she is very cute.When we were young.We like stickes that always together..eating,sleeping,shopping and so on .we always deal with something.Now I have a nice husband.He is policeman.I am very honor to him.Because he can proect people.

Refering to hobby. I have a lot of hobbies, such as singing, traveling and reading. When I sing, I fell very cool and enjoy the songs. Traveling can make me relax, and I also fell embraced by nature. ...

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Refering to hobby. I have a lot of hobbies, such as singing, traveling and reading. When I sing, I fell very cool and enjoy the songs. Traveling can make me relax, and I also fell embraced by nature. However, reading is my favorite, as reading books can let me know lots of things. In other words, reading books helped me enlarge my knowledge.(后面两句太多余了）
Introduce your family.
I have a nice family. There are five people in my family，mother,father,sister,my husband and I.My mother is little bit overweight. I really love my mother’s culinary skill, but I prefer my father's. My sister is beautiful and cute. When we were yong. we always sticked together,eating,sleeping,shopping and so on. At the same time, we together sovled problems. Now, I have a nice husband. He is policeman. I am very proud of him,because he can proect people.

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