我写的英语四级作文,希望可以帮忙修改一下,给打分吧 我能受打击,1,电子词典的优点2,电子词典的缺点3,我的看法.advantages and disadvantage of electrionic dictionaryNowadays,there have an increasing number of elec

我写的英语四级作文,希望可以帮忙修改一下,给打分吧 我能受打击,1,电子词典的优点2,电子词典的缺点3,我的看法.advantages and disadvantage of electrionic dictionaryNowadays,there have an increasing number of elec
我写的英语四级作文,希望可以帮忙修改一下,给打分吧 我能受打击,
1,电子词典的优点
2,电子词典的缺点
3,我的看法.
advantages and disadvantage of electrionic dictionary
Nowadays,there have an increasing number of electrionic dictionarys apprent in china .More and more people like to use these to finding words in daily life.Electrionic dictionarys really have their advantages,the obvirous one is debutlessly its speed which save people a lot of time.With electrionic dirctionary the word be find repidly and easely.On the contrary ,without electrionic dictionarys ,perhaps people has to reconsider how to findind words in the dictionary.Besides ,they are very small,so it is convenicence for people to carrying it.
However ,electrionic dictionarys also have disadvantage .For one something,people especially students have become too indispensable to remember words mean..For another many peoples are addicted to playing game in the electrionic dictionary,it is bed for people study or work.
concerning with the speed and convenience ,They will be ,I think.become more in the future because in a competing saciety how to save time is a aim that people court to.

我写的英语四级作文,希望可以帮忙修改一下,给打分吧 我能受打击,1,电子词典的优点2,电子词典的缺点3,我的看法.advantages and disadvantage of electrionic dictionaryNowadays,there have an increasing number of elec
apprent是什么?你想说的是什么.
finding 前面是to 后面应该是find.
dictionarys 应该是ies.
obvirous应该是obvious.
debutlessly应该是undoubtedly
which save应该是saves
the word be find repidly and easely 应该是is found rapidly and easily.(太无语了)
how to findind?finding; in the dictionary改为traditional paper-based dictionary.
so it is convenicence for people to carrying it.
convenience,而且应是convenient,carry it.
For one something,people especially students have become too indispensable to remember words mean
for one something?没听过,indispensable用错了,人应该是lazy.mean应该是meaning
.竟然出现many peoples?崩溃...
bed.bad ,后面应该是to study or work
老兄,说句实话,你是不是故意来百度知道耍人玩的?

补充楼上：1.第一句there和 have还能一起用？there be句型啊！怎么还能用have？2.apprent ？你想说的是出现这个单词吧！查查英语字典；3.Electrionic dictionarys really have 用have？个人认为dictionaries该是集体名词，应该用单数has；4.have their advantages中their该用its；5.remembe...

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补充楼上：1.第一句there和 have还能一起用？there be句型啊！怎么还能用have？2.apprent ？你想说的是出现这个单词吧！查查英语字典；3.Electrionic dictionarys really have 用have？个人认为dictionaries该是集体名词，应该用单数has；4.have their advantages中their该用its；5.remember words mean中words该用所有格；6.playing game改用复数。要睡觉了粗看了一下结合楼上的，你自己再好好看看吧！加油！！！

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除了语法，我还想说点哈，仅个人观点;你的这个文章内容有点空洞，最重要的是没有分清层次结构，虽然有一个besides，，但是但是优点说的那段论点论据都太不充足了。从文章看，你是倾向优点，我认为开头就应该亮明观点，这样阅卷老师的时候才会觉得你逻辑是清晰的。。。语法我就不说了哈，楼上都说的挺细致的...

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除了语法，我还想说点哈，仅个人观点;你的这个文章内容有点空洞，最重要的是没有分清层次结构，虽然有一个besides，，但是但是优点说的那段论点论据都太不充足了。从文章看，你是倾向优点，我认为开头就应该亮明观点，这样阅卷老师的时候才会觉得你逻辑是清晰的。。。语法我就不说了哈，楼上都说的挺细致的

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apprent改成apparently,finding改成find,obvirous改成obvious，easely改成easily,
The words can be found rapidly and easily by electronic dictionary.
They are very small,so its convenient to carry.
Firs...

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apprent改成apparently,finding改成find,obvirous改成obvious，easely改成easily,
The words can be found rapidly and easily by electronic dictionary.
They are very small,so its convenient to carry.
First,some students become lazy to remember the words' meaning.many people are addicted in playing game of the electronic dictionary,Its bad for studying or working.
社会是society，句子不同 写错的词真多

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