求修改一篇英语文章Today,I want to introduce an American movie,named "Warm Bodies".This is a story about a zombie and a girl.The movie starts with R explaining that he is a zombie but doesn't remember who he was or how he became a zombie at t

求修改一篇英语文章Today,I want to introduce an American movie,named "Warm Bodies".This is a story about a zombie and a girl.The movie starts with R explaining that he is a zombie but doesn't remember who he was or how he became a zombie at t
求修改一篇英语文章
Today,I want to introduce an American movie,named "Warm Bodies".This is a story about a zombie and a girl.
The movie starts with R explaining that he is a zombie but doesn't remember who he was or how he became a zombie at the airport.He wanders around and shows you his life.
But after R met Julie,things began to change,he rekindled the human emotion ——love .When R meets Julie ,he wants to protect and please her.Then R begins regaining his humanity
Along the days,they develop a weird relationship and from friends become lovers.Soon the zombies including R change their emotions and are capable to dream.
Finally,they have a happy life!

求修改一篇英语文章Today,I want to introduce an American movie,named "Warm Bodies".This is a story about a zombie and a girl.The movie starts with R explaining that he is a zombie but doesn't remember who he was or how he became a zombie at t
Today I want to introduce an American movie,Warm Bodies.It is about a zomie,R and a girl,Julie.
At the beginning,R expalins that he is a zombie but he can't remember who he was and how he became a zobie at the airport.He wanders around and leads his own life.
Later he meets Julie and,surprisingly,human love goes back to him again.He gradually regains humanity.When he is with Julie,he wants to protect and please her.As time goes,they devlop a relationship from friends to lovers.Later R and other zombies change their emotions and become capable to dream.
Eventually,R and Julie have a happy life.
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Today, I want to introduce an American movie, whose name is "Warm Bodies". This is a story about a zombie and a girl.
The movie starts with R explaining that he is a zombie but he doesn't remember...

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Today, I want to introduce an American movie, whose name is "Warm Bodies". This is a story about a zombie and a girl.
The movie starts with R explaining that he is a zombie but he doesn't remember who he was or how he became a zombie at the airport. He wanders around the world and shows you his life.

But after R met Julie, things began to change， he rekindled the human emotion——love .When R meets Julie ，he wants to protect and please her. Then R begins regaining his humanity.

Along the days, they develop a weird relationship and become lovers. Soon the zombies R change their emotions and are capable to dream.

Finally, they live a happy life!

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The movie starts with R ‘s explaina , he is a zombie but doesn't remember the reason why he became a zombie at the airport. He wanders around and shows you his life.
But after R met Julie, thing...

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The movie starts with R ‘s explaina , he is a zombie but doesn't remember the reason why he became a zombie at the airport. He wanders around and shows you his life.
But after R met Julie, things began to change， he rekindled the human emotion ——love .When R met Julie ，he wants to protect and please her. Then R begins regaining his humannity
我只改了这些 也不知道改的对不对 自己判断吧

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