哪位英语好的同学可以帮我改一下这段英语的语法,Soon I was promoted to the restaurant supervisor.In addition to worked in the restaurant.I began to responsible for the restaurant catering.I was often went to some embassies,universi

哪位英语好的同学可以帮我改一下这段英语的语法,Soon I was promoted to the restaurant supervisor.In addition to worked in the restaurant.I began to responsible for the restaurant catering.I was often went to some embassies,universi
哪位英语好的同学可以帮我改一下这段英语的语法,
Soon I was promoted to the restaurant supervisor.In addition to worked in the restaurant.I began to responsible for the restaurant catering.I was often went to some embassies,universities,enterprises and some star's home to made the party and conference services.In April 2013,In the RENAISSANCE BEIJING CAPITAL HOTEL there is an Italy Restaurant,call the "Fratellifresh".They hired me to be this Restaurant Supervisor.But I believed at the time I did't have enough ability for the job.I needed to learn a lot .I needed more experience.So I refused them.I like this kind of job.It makes me come into contact with many different people and different things.There are always different problems to be solved.So you are always learning and the accumulation experience.It is also brought me a lot of interest .When the guests left the restaurant .I saw the guest's satisfied smile.I would feel very happy.Then I would put more energy into your work.I like to work in the restaurant and hotel.I hope in my service to each of the guests are satisfied smile

哪位英语好的同学可以帮我改一下这段英语的语法,Soon I was promoted to the restaurant supervisor.In addition to worked in the restaurant.I began to responsible for the restaurant catering.I was often went to some embassies,universi
Soon I was promoted to the restaurant supervisor.In addition to working in the restaurant.,I began to be responsible for the restaurant catering.I often go to some embassies,universities,enterprises and some stars' home to provide the party and conference services.In April 2013,an Italy restaurant called RENAISSANCE BEIJING CAPITAL HOTEL there is ,also known as "Fratellifresh" hired me to be their Restaurant Supervisor.But at the time I believed I was not up to the job.I still needed to learn a lot,and I needed more experience.So I refused them.I like this kind of job.It offers me some chances to come into contact with many different people and different things.There are always different problems to be solved.So you are always learning and accumulating experience.It can also brings me a lot of interest .When the guests leave the restaurant ,if I see their satisfied smile,I would feel very happy.Then I would put more energy into my work.I like to work in the restaurant and hotel.I hope each guest can be satisfied with my service.Their smile is the biggest reward to my effort.（将你原文的语法错误改了一下,大概根据你想要表达的意思适当调整了一下语序,最后一句是我改写的）

建议您把中文写出来。语法错误太多，不明白原意。