高中英语作文记叙文该如何写请各位回答者不要复制了，你麻烦，我看着也累，直接给网址不就好了

高中英语作文记叙文该如何写请各位回答者不要复制了，你麻烦，我看着也累，直接给网址不就好了
高中英语作文记叙文该如何写
请各位回答者不要复制了，你麻烦，我看着也累，直接给网址不就好了

高中英语作文记叙文该如何写请各位回答者不要复制了，你麻烦，我看着也累，直接给网址不就好了

说一下我的方法吧,手打得哦

1. 描述相关内容.

   一般需要你描写某件事或图片,当然也有可能是图文并茂.开头可以是As we konw  / As we can see from the picture 等.然后将需要你表述的内容完整的表述下来,切记①不要漏点 .②不要生硬、逐字逐句的去翻译.

2. 发表你的观点.

   开头可以是As far as I am concerned / In my opinion 等.这个部分比较自由,可以事先准备好一些句子,适当的时候直接套用上去即可（在这个部分尽量写一些复杂点的句子,有助于得高分）

   ps：给你几个我以前在学校经常用的结尾（它们都是曾经帮助我取得高分的神器哦）

   ①If everyone does like as I what mentioned above ,XXXwill be better day by day.(初中时用的- - )

   ②Only if we do like this ,can we XXX

   ③Only if we XXX for the sake of the entire human race,can we heal the world gradually.

   总论：

   ①描述部分是“要你写的”,观点部分是“你要写的”,这点一定要搞清楚.

   ②各段开头最好是一个从句（长长的那种哦）例如：“XX have become a serious problem we are facing at present,so I think immediate actions should be taken to prevent it from hapening again

   ③作文中要多运用 and so but 等连词（这点我记得高中的评分标准里面好像有）,从句两个吧,再加一个倒装会更美丽.

   ④书写工整、规范are 不可以写成r.

    今天就说这么多啦~哈哈~希望可以帮到你哦~~~

   
   

我的暑假 My Summer Holiday
Times flys. My summer holiday is coming to the end. My holiday is just so so. It is not too much difference as before. At the biginning of the vacation, I was doing my homew...

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我的暑假 My Summer Holiday
Times flys. My summer holiday is coming to the end. My holiday is just so so. It is not too much difference as before. At the biginning of the vacation, I was doing my homework. After all, study comes first. After I finished my homework, it was almost the end of July. It is the time for me to help my family for harvest. It is so tired to to the farm work. Howevr, being a member of our family, I have to give a hand. Watching the achievement, I felt proud though I just help a little. After finished the farm work, I found myself become much more tan. Who cares! It was my happy time, when I finished all the things. I went out with my friends almost everyday. Sometimes we played games or sport or went hiking. Sometimes we went shopping in the evening for the sun is too heavy in the daytime. We felt uncomfortable. But now there are two days left before the school opening time. So I have to stay at home for a good rest to store energy for my study. Everything is so perfect. It is 11 o’clock. I think I have to say good ninght now.
时间飞逝。我的暑假就要结束了。我的假期一般般。在假期一开始的时候，我写家庭作业。毕竟，学习是最重要的嘛。我做完作业后，几乎到了七月底了。是时候帮助家人收获了。干农活是如此的累。然而，作为家庭的一员，我不得不帮忙。虽然我只是帮了一点点，但是看着那些成果我感到很骄傲。干完农活后，我发现自己变得更黑了。不过，谁在乎呢。当我完成了所有的事情就是我的快乐时光。我几乎每天都和我的朋友出去玩。有时我们玩游戏或运动或去爬山。有时我们晚上出去购物，因为白天太阳太烈了。我们觉得难受。但现在离开学还有两天的时间。所以我必须呆在家里为学习养精蓄锐。一切都是那么的美好。现在已经十一点了。我想是该说晚安的时候了。

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　　一、记叙文的特点
　　
　　记叙文是以叙述、描写为主要表达手段来记人、叙事、写景、状物的一种文体。通常分为三类：1．以记人物为主的记叙文，即以人物为中心组织材料，围绕这个人物来写一件事或两件事。2．以事件为主的记叙文，即以事件为中心组织材料，围绕中心事件，可以写一个人或几个人。3．以写景状物为主的记叙文。但是“人以事显，事由人生”，人和事是密不可分的。也就是说，在一篇记叙文中，...

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　　一、记叙文的特点
　　
　　记叙文是以叙述、描写为主要表达手段来记人、叙事、写景、状物的一种文体。通常分为三类：1．以记人物为主的记叙文，即以人物为中心组织材料，围绕这个人物来写一件事或两件事。2．以事件为主的记叙文，即以事件为中心组织材料，围绕中心事件，可以写一个人或几个人。3．以写景状物为主的记叙文。但是“人以事显，事由人生”，人和事是密不可分的。也就是说，在一篇记叙文中，记人、写景、叙事往往是交织在一起的，不可硬性分开，但各有侧重。
　　
　　二、记叙文的写作技巧
　　
　　在写记叙文时通常应遵循以下几点：
　　
　　1．在下笔时先要定下内容和中心。定内容就是常说的选材，选材要注意一是新颖，二是真实。因为新颖的题材能够吸引读者的兴趣，真实的内容才能流露出真情实感，这是评定一篇佳作的标准。选材时不一定总是要写惊天动地的大事，也可以写日常生活中的小事，通过“以小见大”的点滴小事更能反映出一个人的性格特征和精神风貌，更能体现生活气息，更能打动读者。定中心时要注意一是明确，二是集中。明确就是要抓住文章要表现什么，要做到心中有数，让读者一目了然。集中就是文章要表达的意思，不能太分散。另外在定中心时一定要把握好分寸，不必过分追求突出。
　　
　　2．要交待要素，即时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过和结果。在行文的过程中交待要素时，不能像答题时一样呆板，要根据情况灵活把握，不需作者交待读者就能明白的可以省略。
　　
　　3．要力求内容具体。有了具体的内容，文章才能显得生动，才能使人受到感染并留下深刻的印象。要做到这一点，必须善于在叙事过程中对最能体现人物思想、性格特征的肖像、语言、行动和心理等进行适当地描写。
　　
　　4．要根据文章的中心确定详略并且要得当。
　　
　　5．对于写景状物类的文章，要注意写出被描写事物的形和神，做到形神兼俱，更重要的是一定要写出作者的思想感情，表达出作者的人生态度和追求等。这类文章我们可以采用“借景抒情”“托物言志”的写作方法。6．写作时要注意时态和人称。一般用第一人称写本人的经历和耳闻目睹的事情，用第三人称写他人经历的事情，记叙文所记的一般是过去发生的事情，所以原则上通常用过去时态来写。
　　
　　三、记叙文佳作欣赏
　　
　　My Father
　　
　　My father is a tall man with a pair of glasses． Everyone says he is a kind－hearted man． He often helps our neighbors and some strangers whom he doesn’t know at all． He has really done a lot for others． I don’t like him to do so because I think it has taken him too much time． When I discourage him， he always says with a smile， “The world needs warm hearts．”
　　
　　My father loves our family， and loves his work even better． In the company， he is called “workaholic”． He spends most of his time working， and he often forgets to have meals or to go to bed． As a result， he doesn’t enjoy good health．
　　
　　My father likes reading in his spare time． He told me reading was very interesting． I became interested in reading little by little． I like books， because they help me in many ways． My father has a bad habit — he likes smoking very much． I hate it． Look， the house is full of smoke． I know it’s bad for his health as well as mine and my mother’s． I advise him to give up smoking．I’m sure he will follow my advice some day．
　　
　　Such is my father． I love him very much． I am proud of having so good a father．
　　
　　【评析】本文是很好地运用了首括句的方法，使我们对作者父亲的特点一目了然。一位严格自律，工作认真，乐于助人，热爱家庭的慈父跃然纸上。同时，我们从文中也感受到浓浓的父女深情。
　　
　　A Visit to Qinhuang Island
　　
　　Last summer the weather was hotter than usual． Everything was done， but people couldn’t make themselves comfortable． The summer holidays came， and my family decided to go to Qinhuang Island to spend a few days there． On the first day of our trip， we climbed up the hill called Xifeng， which is near the coast． You can’t imagine how wonderful the view is from the top of Xifeng． Here was an overall picture of the small town． We saw lots of white buildings with red roofs among big green trees． There is the vast sea with many little green islands on it．
　　
　　The next day we got up early and went excitedly to the beach near the hotel to watch the sun rising． We looked to the east． The clouds were reddish and then turned bright red． Soon the sun slowly showed half of her face． The sky around the sun was very bright and suddenly the sun had a leap from the sea and her full face appeared with golden rays setting out． The sea looked as if it was covered with red silk． The sight was so beautiful that we would never forget it．
　　
　　Not only is the scenery beautiful there， but the people there are very friendly． We also bought many things there， such as necklaces， shells and a lot of sea－food．
　　
　　To our disappointment， we had to leave the island． But we’ll always remember this trip and the people there．
　　
　　【评析】本文以游记的形式介绍了“秦皇岛”这座海港城市，重点记述了看日出的过程，描写生动，感染力颇强。不仅写了景、物，还写了人，构成一幅生情并茂的图画。
　　
　　An Unforgettable Night
　　
　　At 10 o’clock last Saturday night I came out of the cinema． It was cold and the road was covered with snow．
　　
　　Suddenly I saw a woman fall off her bike． She couldn’t get up． I ran to her at once and tried to help her to sit up． She said that her right leg was broken． I was worrying about when a young policeman came over． He called a taxi． I took her to a hospital and telephoned her family about the matter． As I saw the woman was well looked after， I said goodbye to her．
　　
　　I felt happy I could help the woman and I also hope she will be soon getting well．
　　
　　【评析】本文是一篇典型的三段文章，第一段介绍人物、时间及故事的背景；第二段写事件过程；第三段写感受。全文结构紧凑，情节完整。

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这个应该老师有讲过吧
多用简单句或自己熟悉的句型，不要用拿不准的单词，有一定的逻辑这是初中老师说的，现在说作文要高级句型，简单句根本拿不到几分比如像现在进行时/一般过去时/过去进行时这一类简单点的时态
另外一些短语啊，比较级啊ok，你说的是基础，这真的是初中的要求，一篇作文第一要点就是时态，我还可以告诉你，用短语不如用副词好吧，其实这种问题还是得问你的老师，毕竟你交了学费了...

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这个应该老师有讲过吧
多用简单句或自己熟悉的句型，不要用拿不准的单词，有一定的逻辑

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　书面表达中常用的连接词
　　(1)，表选择关系或对等关系的连接词：either…or…,neither…nor…,or,aswellas,and,both…and….
　　(2)，表因果关系的连接词：therefore,so,asaresult,astheresultof,becauseof,dueto,owingto,thanksto等。
　　(3)，表时间顺序的连接词...

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　书面表达中常用的连接词
　　(1)，表选择关系或对等关系的连接词：either…or…,neither…nor…,or,aswellas,and,both…and….
　　(2)，表因果关系的连接词：therefore,so,asaresult,astheresultof,becauseof,dueto,owingto,thanksto等。
　　(3)，表时间顺序的连接词：themoment,assoonas,atfirst,then,later,meanwhile,atthebeginning,intheend,beforelong,forthefirsttime,theminute.
　　(4)，表转折关系的连接词：yet,andyet,but,while,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand,however,atthesametime(然而)等。
　　(5)，表解释说明的连接词：thatis,thatistosay,inotherwords,suchas,forexample,forinstance,andsoon,etc,andthelike,andwhatnot等。
　　(6)，表递进关系的连接词：notonly…but(also),what’smore,what’sworse,besides,inaddition,worsestill,moreover,aboveall等。
　　(7)，表总结的连接词：inaword,onthewhole,inshort,briefly,inbrief,tosumup,inall等
　　1)表层次:
　　first,firstly,tobeginwith,further,inthefirstplace
　　second,secondly,tostartwith,still,furthermore
　　third,thirdly,whatismore,last,lastbutnotleast
　　also,andthen,next,besides
　　andequallyimportanttoomoreover
　　besidesinaddtionfinally
　　2)表转折;
　　bycontrastalthoughthoughyet
　　atthesametimebutdespitethefactthatevenso
　　incontrastneverthelesseventhoughforallthat
　　notwithstandingonthecontararyhoweverinspiteof
　　ontheotherhandotherwiseinsteadstill
　　regardless
　　3)表因果;
　　therforeconsequentlybecauseofforthereason
　　thushenceduetoowingto
　　soaccordinglythankstoonthisaccount
　　sinceasonthataccountinthisway
　　forasaresultasaconsequence
　　4)表让步
　　stillneverthelessconcessiongrantednaturally
　　inspiteofallthesameofcoursedespite
　　evensoafterall
　　5)表递近
　　furthermoremoreoverlikewisewhatismore
　　besidesalsonotonly...butalso...
　　tooinaddtion
　　6)表举例
　　forexampleforinstanceforonethingthatis
　　toillustrateasanillustrationacaseinpoint
　　7)表解释
　　asamatteroffactfranklyspeakinginthiscasenamely
　　inotherwords
　　8)表总结
　　insummaryinawordthusashasbeensaid
　　inbriefinconclusionaltogetherinotherwords
　　toconcludeinfactfinallyinsimplerterms
　　indeedinshortinparticularthatis
　　inotherwordsofcourseonthewholetoputitdifferently
　　namelyinallthereforetosummarize。

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