请英文厉害的人帮我检查我自己写的英文文章里的文法和句型,If you could change your life,what would you want to do?And if you could achieve this goal,how would your life change?I wouldn't want to go back into the past (mainly b
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请英文厉害的人帮我检查我自己写的英文文章里的文法和句型,If you could change your life,what would you want to do?And if you could achieve this goal,how would your life change?I wouldn't want to go back into the past (mainly b
请英文厉害的人帮我检查我自己写的英文文章里的文法和句型,
If you could change your life,what would you want to do?And if you could achieve this goal,how would your life change?
I wouldn't want to go back into the past (mainly because I wouldn't want to relive that again) but I could change anything I would be my lack of confidence. I didn't have any confidence in myself. For example,When I read passages or answer questions in class,I am so nervous that I can't say a full sentence.After class,I speak fluently,but whenever teachers call me,I feel afraid. The reason why I failed was that I lacked confidence.So I think that's what I would change.I want to be full of confidence any time.My life would be perfect if I had full of confidence.I think,maybe I can go to a great college.There can be no achievement without diligence and self-confidence.Of course,I like Soochow University now.
请英文厉害的人帮我检查我自己写的英文文章里的文法和句型,If you could change your life,what would you want to do?And if you could achieve this goal,how would your life change?I wouldn't want to go back into the past (mainly b
relive that again 重复了,可以live that again 或 relive that;
but I could change anything I would be my lack of confidence 这句我认为应该改为：but if I could change anything that would be my my lack of confidence.
The reason why I failed was that I lacked confidence 这句应该保持现在时态吧
其他的我觉得没问题,写得其实还不错.