高一英语短文改错 I can't swim because I have a strong fear of water．Look back at my childhood experience,I think 1.____．that three reason might explain the fear．The first reason 2．——is that 1 was not allowed to go near the water 3

高一英语短文改错 I can't swim because I have a strong fear of water．Look back at my childhood experience,I think 1.____．that three reason might explain the fear．The first reason 2．——is that 1 was not allowed to go near the water 3
高一英语短文改错
I can't swim because I have a strong fear of water．
Look back at my childhood experience,I think 1.____．
that three reason might explain the fear．The first reason 2．——
is that 1 was not allowed to go near the water 3_____
when 1 was a child．for my mother had unreasonable 4．——
fear of it．So,even as a child I was taught see the 5______
water as something danger．Second,my eyes became 6．——
bad ones when I was five．If I took off my glasses in the 7．——
water,I couldn't see anything.but this increased my 8______
fear．The worst part of your experience is that as a 9_____．
child of ten I see a neighbor drown．Since then I 10_____．
have been more frightened．

高一英语短文改错 I can't swim because I have a strong fear of water．Look back at my childhood experience,I think 1.____．that three reason might explain the fear．The first reason 2．——is that 1 was not allowed to go near the water 3
1.Look→Looking.此处应该用现在分词作状语.
2.reason→reasons
3.对
4.在unreasonable 前加an.
5.在see前加to.
6.danger→dangerous.形容词修饰复合不定代词.
7.去掉ones.
8.but→so.此处表达因果关系.
9.your→my.
10.see→saw.
有空做一下这一篇：
I can't swim because I have a strong fear of water.Look back 1.________
my childhood experiences,I think that three reasons might 2.________
explain the fear.The first reason is that I was not allow to go 3.________
near the water when I was a child,for my mother had a 4.________
unreasonable fear of it.So,even as a child that I was taught to 5.________
see the water as something danger.Second,my eyes 6.________
became bad when I was five.If I took off my glass in the 7.________
water,I couldn't see anything,or this increased my fear.8.________
The worst part of my experience is that as a child I saw 9.________
a neighbor drowned.After then I have been more frightened.10.________
1.Look→Looking.此处应该用现在分词作状语.
2.my前面加on / upon.look back on / upon是固定短语,意为回顾.
3.allow→allowed.此处应该用被动语态.
4.第二个a→an.unreasonable fear是以元音音素开头,故用不定冠词an.
5.去掉that.此句是简单句,that是多余用词.
6.danger→dangerous.形容词修饰复合不定代词.
7.glass→glasses.复数名词glasses意为眼镜.
8.or→so.此处表达因果关系.
9.本行无错.
10.After→Since.介词短语since then常与现在完成时态连用.

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