各位高手可以帮我看看我写的英语作文有没有语法错误?作文如下：IHello,I am xxx(名字）.I am a girl.I am come from China .I am a student.I am in No.8 middle school ,I am in class3 grade 7 .I like astronomy .I think it is ver

各位高手可以帮我看看我写的英语作文有没有语法错误?作文如下：IHello,I am xxx(名字）.I am a girl.I am come from China .I am a student.I am in No.8 middle school ,I am in class3 grade 7 .I like astronomy .I think it is ver
各位高手可以帮我看看我写的英语作文有没有语法错误?
作文如下：
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Hello,I am xxx(名字）.I am a girl.I am come from China .I am a student.I am in No.8 middle school ,I am in class3 grade 7 .I like astronomy .I think it is very wonderful .My favorite color is blue .oh,that is fish.I like eating them.It isvery delicious.I am going to play with xxx名字 tomorrow .

各位高手可以帮我看看我写的英语作文有没有语法错误?作文如下：IHello,I am xxx(名字）.I am a girl.I am come from China .I am a student.I am in No.8 middle school ,I am in class3 grade 7 .I like astronomy .I think it is ver
Hello,I am xxx(名字）.I am a girl.I come from China .I am a student.I am in No.8 middle school ,I am in class3 grade 7 .I like astronomy .I think it is very wonderful .My favorite color is blue .oh,that is fish.I like eating them.They are very delicious.I am going to play with xxx名字 tomorrow .
（I come from China 和 I am from China 都可以,但是不能写成 I am come from China
有几处错误已经帮你改好了,

第三句。改成 I come from China。 第五句 class 和 grade 首字母大写 倒数第三句 them 改成it。 没了

不要直接说oh, that is fish.
说I like eating fish.就可以了
你可以放在Microsoft Office Word里查一下拼写、语法
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你好，修改如下:Hello,I am xxx(名字）. I am a girl. I come from China . I am a student studying in No.8 middle school , and I am in Class3,Grade 7 . I like astronomy . I think it is very wonderful . My favorite ...

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你好，修改如下:Hello,I am xxx(名字）. I am a girl. I come from China . I am a student studying in No.8 middle school , and I am in Class3,Grade 7 . I like astronomy . I think it is very wonderful . My favorite color is blue . oh, they are fishes. I like eating them. They're very delicious. I am going to play with xxx名字 tomorrow .满意速速采纳，谢谢合作！

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