帮我修改下英语作文Duringour daily life we can’t leave medicine,When you’re feeling uncomfortable,youhave must go to see a doctor If you are seriously ill.All in all,publichealth is directly related to medical.Medicine is a abstract scien

帮我修改下英语作文Duringour daily life we can’t leave medicine,When you’re feeling uncomfortable,youhave must go to see a doctor If you are seriously ill.All in all,publichealth is directly related to medical.Medicine is a abstract scien
帮我修改下英语作文
During
our daily life we can’t leave medicine,When you’re feeling uncomfortable,you
have must go to see a doctor If you are seriously ill.All in all,public
health is directly related to medical.Medicine is a abstract scientific,in
the world today,health is the most precious wealth of life.That’s the reason why I want to study for an medicine.In addition,ever since I was ten years
ago,I’ve dreamt of becoming a doctor.Therefore,I have been working hard for
my dream,after two years of hard study.I has to lay a solid foundation.So,I
believe .I have the conditions to learn it well.I believe .where there is a
will,there is a way.
在我们的日常生活中我们不能离医学,当你感觉不舒服或者你病得很重就必须去看医生.总之,医疗关乎人类的健康.医学是一个深奥的科学,在当今世界,健康是人生最宝贵的财富.这就是我选择读医学的原因.此外,自从我是十年前,我梦想成为一名医生.因此,我一直为我的梦想努力学习,经过两年的努力学习.我已经打下了坚实的基础.所以,我相信.我有条件学好它.我相信.有志者事竟成.

帮我修改下英语作文Duringour daily life we can’t leave medicine,When you’re feeling uncomfortable,youhave must go to see a doctor If you are seriously ill.All in all,publichealth is directly related to medical.Medicine is a abstract scien
Medical science plays an important role in our daily life. Especially when you are seriously ill, you need a doctor. All in all, medical is closely related to public health. Medicine is an abstract scientific.Currently, health is the most precious wealth of life. That’s the reason why I decide to major in Medical science. In addition, ever since ten years ago, I’ve dreamt of becoming a doctor. Therefore, I have been going after my dream all the way. After two years of hard study, I had lay a solid foundation. So, I believe that I have the conditions to learn it well. And the proverb always inspire me: where there is a will, there is a way.
我英语也不是很好,大概改了一下,楼主可以自己再改改