请大家帮忙修改这篇英语作文Hello,everyone.Very glad to be here.My nameis Wang Chang,and i am 13 years old.Now i am a student.My favorite subject is Chinese.Because it is very interesting.But i don't like P.E.Because it is too tired.Myfavo
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请大家帮忙修改这篇英语作文Hello,everyone.Very glad to be here.My nameis Wang Chang,and i am 13 years old.Now i am a student.My favorite subject is Chinese.Because it is very interesting.But i don't like P.E.Because it is too tired.Myfavo
请大家帮忙修改这篇英语作文
Hello,everyone.Very glad to be here.My nameis Wang Chang,and i am 13 years old.Now i am a student.My favorite subject is Chinese.Because it is very interesting.But i don't like P.E.Because it is too tired.Myfavorite star is Zhang Jie.Because he worked very hard.I like animals.My favorite animais are cats.Because they are cute.This is me.Thank you for listening.
哪里出现了语法错误,我会及时改正.
请大家帮忙修改这篇英语作文Hello,everyone.Very glad to be here.My nameis Wang Chang,and i am 13 years old.Now i am a student.My favorite subject is Chinese.Because it is very interesting.But i don't like P.E.Because it is too tired.Myfavo
前面都可以,只是这句But i don't like P.E.Because it is too tired. 不能说体育太累了,应该说我上体育课太累了,所以应该改成I don't like P.E. Because I feel very tired in this subject (lesson). 其他的都还可以.挺好的自我介绍.
希望能帮到你,祝更上一层楼O(∩_∩)O
Hello,everyone.Very glad to be here.My name is Wang Chang,and i am 13 years old.Now i am a student. My favorite subject is Chinese, because(引导原因状语从句，最好不要独立成句） it is very interesting.But i don't like P...
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Hello,everyone.Very glad to be here.My name is Wang Chang,and i am 13 years old.Now i am a student. My favorite subject is Chinese, because(引导原因状语从句，最好不要独立成句） it is very interesting.But i don't like P.E, because it is too tired (to have P.E class不是“体育课累”，是你自己做这件事累）. My favorite star is Zhang Jie.Because he worked（改为works因为张杰没有死） very hard. I like animals.My favorite animais are cats, because they are cute.This is me.Thank you for listening.
文中几处都用了because，我都稍作了修改，原因一样，就不一一指出了
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