请帮我点评下我翻译的这篇英语短文.Fashion does not always mean you have to wear what the others wear.时尚并不是意味着你不得不穿别人所穿的!How about thinking I will make the world wear what I wear?想一下我将让世

请帮我点评下我翻译的这篇英语短文.Fashion does not always mean you have to wear what the others wear.时尚并不是意味着你不得不穿别人所穿的!How about thinking I will make the world wear what I wear?想一下我将让世
请帮我点评下我翻译的这篇英语短文.
Fashion does not always mean you have to wear what the others wear.
时尚并不是意味着你不得不穿别人所穿的!
How about thinking I will make the world wear what I wear?
想一下我将让世界上的人穿我所穿的,那会是怎么样呢?
You can always make your own style statement.
你总是能够拥有你自己的风格宣言.
If you had this misconception that fashion is only for the slim and trim., then think again.
如果你有时尚只是对苗条和匀称的人来说这个错误观念,那在考虑一次吧!
Even the clothing industry has now realized that a perfect body is not what everyone possesses
甚至,现在的服装业已经认识到并不是每个人都拥有一个完美的身材.
So clothes that fit one and all have been designed and that is good news for those who wear plusized clothes.
因此衣服适合一个人或者都被设计过的,那是对于穿着不合身衣服的人的一个好消息.
Those days, “bold” is the word to look out for,
如今果敢是一个值得留意的单词.
Bold colors ,bold prints , bold patterns, bold cuts are ruling the fashion scene currently.
果敢的颜色,装饰,图案,花销主宰着当今的时尚潮流.
It matches the bold attitude of the youth today, who care about what others think.
它搭配着年轻人的果敢态度.
The appropriate word for the fashion today is also “shocking”, as every other outfit is different and has something unique and attractive and it never ceases to surprise you.
适合时尚的词还有摇摆,正如每一套服装都是不同的,他拥有一些独特的与吸引人的地方,而且从来不会停止惊喜你.
Clothes are much more today than just fashion statement. So investing a little time and money in them is surely worth it any day.
衣服比时尚宣言多,因此投入一点时间与金钱在他们上,确实是值得的!

请帮我点评下我翻译的这篇英语短文.Fashion does not always mean you have to wear what the others wear.时尚并不是意味着你不得不穿别人所穿的!How about thinking I will make the world wear what I wear?想一下我将让世
衣服只是一种用来打扮自己的东西,如果本身长得不好看,穿在好看的衣服也没用；本身就好看,那就不用再用一些贵的衣服打扮自己了.所以,一个人拼命想打扮自己,让自己更美,这是一种自欺欺人的态度,虽然人靠衣装佛靠金装,但是这些都是为了掩盖自己的不足,如果没了这些东西.所以,我认为是不值得的

嗯......有点小瑕疵。有点过于直白。注意细节吧。

很好啊，不过我感觉你用的词语太现代化了~总体翻译起来是很棒的

“色氨酸合成酶A蛋白质”
（一种含有267种氨基酸酶）的全称----
一般的字典上是见不着的。
可以翻翻医学专用词汇字典^_*
单词如下：
Methionylglutaminylarginyltyrosylglutamylserylleucylphenylalanylalany
lglutaminylleucyllysylglutamylarginy...

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“色氨酸合成酶A蛋白质”
（一种含有267种氨基酸酶）的全称----
一般的字典上是见不着的。
可以翻翻医学专用词汇字典^_*
单词如下：
Methionylglutaminylarginyltyrosylglutamylserylleucylphenylalanylalany
lglutaminylleucyllysylglutamylarginyllysylglutamylglycylalanylphenyla
lanylvalylprolyphenylalanYlvalythreonylleucylglycylaspartylprolylglyc
ylisoleucylglutamylglutaminylsErylleucyllysylisoleucylaspartylthreony
lleucylIsoleucylglutamylalanylglycylalanylasparthlalanylleucylglutamy
lleucylglycylisoleucylprolylphenylalanylseRylaspartylprolylleucylalan
ylaspartylglycylpRolylthreOnylisoleucylglutaminylasPfraginylalanylthr
eonylleucylarfinylalanylphenylalanylalanylalanylglycylvalythreonylpro
lylalanylglutaminylcysteinylphenylalanylglutamylmethionylleucylalanyl
leuOylisoleucylarginylglutaminyllysyhistidylprolylthreonylisoleucylpr
olylisoleucylglycylleucylmethionyltyrosylalanylasparaginylleucylvalyl
phenylalanylasparaginyllysyglycylisoleucylaspartylglutamylphenylalany
lthrosylalanylglutaminylcysteinylglutamyllysylvalylglycylvalylasparty
lserylvalylleucylvalylalnylaspartylvalylprolylvalylglUtaminylglutamyl
serylalanylprolylphenylalanylarginylglutaminylalanylalanylleucylarginy
lhistidylasparaginyvalylalanylprolylisoleucylprolylisoleucylphenylalan
ylisoleucylphenylalanylisoleucylcysteinylprolylprolylaspartylalanylasp
artylaspartylaspartylleucylleucylarginylglutaminylisoleucylalanylseryl
tyrosylglycylarginylglycyltyrosylthreonyltyrOsylleucylleucylserylargin
ylalanylglycylvalylthreonylglycylalanylglutamYlasparainylarginylalanyl
alanylleucylprolylleucylasparaginylhistidylleucylValylalanyllysylleucy
llysylglutamyltyrosylasparaginylalanylalanylprolylprolylleucylglutaminy
lglgycylphenylalanylglycylisoleucylserylalanylprolylaspartylglutaminylv
alyllysylalanylalanylisoleucylaspartylalanylglycylalanylalanylglycylala
nylisoleucylserylglycylserylalanylisoleucylvalyllysylisoIeucylisoleucyl
glutamylglutaminylHistidylasparaginyliSoleucylglutamylprolylglutamyllys
ylmethionylleucylalanylalanylleucyllysylvalylphenylalanylcalylglutaminy
lprolylmethionlysylalanylalanylthreonylarginylserine

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太过于一一对应了，如果可以更加意译一点，就不会显得这么生硬，也更加符合汉语表达习惯

不错！