请帮忙修改一篇英文信.写给朋友的英文信,有部分中文参考.可追加分数,I finally have some time to write more here today.I watched a MTV few days ago.The leading actress is Lee Chien-na(李千娜),a Taiwanese singer was born in

请帮忙修改一篇英文信.写给朋友的英文信,有部分中文参考.可追加分数,I finally have some time to write more here today.I watched a MTV few days ago.The leading actress is Lee Chien-na(李千娜),a Taiwanese singer was born in
请帮忙修改一篇英文信.写给朋友的英文信,有部分中文参考.可追加分数,
I finally have some time to write more here today.
I watched a MTV few days ago.The leading actress is Lee Chien-na(李千娜),a Taiwanese singer was born in 1984.She got the Best New Performer category in the 47th Golden Horse Awards.When I saw her hairstyle in the MTV,I came to think of your look in 2009.
What I really want to say is,that hairstyle was really quite good.You know,black,mid-long hair seems young,healthy,spirited,what do you think?I believe that all of your students think so.
为了证明这一点,我把压箱底的照片都贡献出来了.只是,你那时的发型师现在在哪里啊?是不是活得好好的?还是你们之间发生了什么事情搞的你不去找他剪头发了?I showed you my ultimate treasured photos to prove it.But I want to know,where is your former hair stylist?Is he still alive?Or what happened between you and him that you don’t go to meet him?Just joking~
As I mentioned,many guys changed a lot I felt when I went back to HK,e.g.Tom,Mike,but actually and you.I want to tell you the truth.Yes.Do you think you look thinner and thinner?So peak and pine~I don’t know what happened to you.Anyway,please,please take care of yourself and keep a good mood.As what I said,there’s always a better way to do anything and I always have a plan
我回到北京这一个多月,有点度日如年.不知道怎么告诉你,也不知道能不能得到你的理解.记得你对我说,不要做无脚的鸟.其实,我非常清楚自己想要的是什么,对此比较坚持,并不想今天落在这里,明天又落在那里,那才是真正的浪费时间.正因为目标太明确,可供选择的余地就很小很小,难度当然也就大得多.可能,这种坚持很难被大多数人原谅.所以我已经不想去一一解释.我得到过太多的坏结果,再坏也坏不到哪去了吧.
More than one month I was back to Beijing,the days passed slowly.I don’t know how to express all about what I want to say in the depths of my mind.And I don’t know whether you could understand me.Remember you said that don't be a bird without feet.In fact,I definitely know what I want to get and insist on it.I don’t hope to settle here today,and settle there tomorrow.It's a waste of time indeed.Just because of having clear target,there is really little choice for me.Accordingly it is more difficult.I guess,my insistence could not be forgiven by most people.So I don’t even think of how to explain myself.I got too many awful results,and I think it should not be much worse even it goes worse.
对了,你上次告诉我TENCENT去年年终发90个月的薪水?因为TENCENT通过猎头找到我,就关注了一下他们的薪水.事实上,M级的员工通常每年可以领到15.5个月的薪水,对公司有特殊贡献的员工可以得到重奖,数字也没有90个月那么夸张.You told me the employee in Tencent got 90 times monthly salary last year.A hunter contacted me for Tencent few days ago,so I confirmed it with him.Normally,the middle-level employee could get 15.5 times monthly salary each year.A big reward could be given to those who have made special contributions,but not that exaggerated.(90 times)
这几天有点想念你.Kinda miss you.

请帮忙修改一篇英文信.写给朋友的英文信,有部分中文参考.可追加分数,I finally have some time to write more here today.I watched a MTV few days ago.The leading actress is Lee Chien-na(李千娜),a Taiwanese singer was born in
Finally I find the time to write you longer today.
I watched an MTV few days ago. The leading actress is Lee Chien-na(李千娜), a Taiwanese singer born in 1984. She won the Best New Performer category prize in the 47th Golden Horse Awards. When I saw her hairstyle in the MTV, your look in 2009 came into my mind.
What I really want to say is that that hairstyle is really quite good. You know, black, mid-long hair seems young, healthy, and vigorous. Do you think so? I believe that all of your students think so.
This is the photo of you, my most treasured, to prove that. And I wondered where you hair dresser is. Is he still alive? Or what happened to you and him that makes you don’t go to him any more? Just joking~~
As I mentioned, many guys changed a lot, I think, when I went back to HK, e.g. Tom, Mike.And you,too,to be honest. Have you found that you look thinner and thinner? I don't know what happened to you. Anyway, please, please take good care of yourself and keep a good mood. As I said, there's always a better way to figure out the problem and I always have a plan B~
It is more than one month that I was back to Beijing. I count the seconds to kill the time.I don’t know how to express all about what I want to say in the depths of my mind. And I don’t know whether you could understand me either. I stil remembered the words you said that don't be a bird without feet. In fact, I definitely know what I want and I do insist on it. I don't like to lead a wandering life without a stable home which in deed is a waste of tim, I think. Just because of having clear target, there is really small space for me to make a choice .And accordingly it is more difficult. I guess, my insistence could not be forgiven by most people. So I don't even think of explaining myself. I have got too many awful results already, and I think it could not be much worse than that even it goes worse.
By the way,you told me that the employees in Tencent got 90 monthly salary last year. A hunter contacted me for Tencent few days ago, so I confirmed it with him. Normally, the middle-level employee could get 15.5 monthly salary yearly. Even the one who made special contritution to the company would be given large reward can't get that much. It is exaggerated.
Kinda miss you these days.
累死我了,一定要给高分啊,真的是很用心的帮你改的,不是光修改病句,很多地方都是根据你的意思重新表达的.