请高手帮忙修改英语作文,A GiftNobody dislikes gifts,especially what they can make us happy.I have received a nice gift,a scarf.At that time I argued with my mother.We didn't want to talk with each other.But the next day,she gived me a beaut

请高手帮忙修改英语作文,A GiftNobody dislikes gifts,especially what they can make us happy.I have received a nice gift,a scarf.At that time I argued with my mother.We didn't want to talk with each other.But the next day,she gived me a beaut
请高手帮忙修改英语作文,
A Gift
Nobody dislikes gifts,especially what they can make us happy.
I have received a nice gift,a scarf.At that time I argued with my mother.We didn't want to talk with each other.But the next day,she gived me a beautiful scarf.She says,"Don't have a cold." I was really excited and I said,"Thank you,mom." She smiled.I think she wasn't mad at me anymore.I know,I got a gift not just,I also received her love.I love her as before.
I usually wear the scarf in winter.I can think of my lovely mother when I see it.I think it's my favorite gift.

请高手帮忙修改英语作文,A GiftNobody dislikes gifts,especially what they can make us happy.I have received a nice gift,a scarf.At that time I argued with my mother.We didn't want to talk with each other.But the next day,she gived me a beaut
Everybody likes gifts,especially which can make them happy.
I have received a nice gift,it is a scarf.At that time I argued with my mother.We didn't want to talk with each other.But the next day,she gived me a beautiful scarf.She says,"Don't catch a cold." I was really excited and I said,"Thank you,mom." She smiled.I think she wouldn't be angry with me anymore.I know,I got a gift as well as her love and I love her as before.
Now I usually wear the scarf in winter.I think it's my favorite gift.

第三行gived 应改为gave

开头不如写成everybody likes gifts^

Nobody does not like gifts, especially which can make us happy.
I have received a nice gift, a scarf. At that time I argued with (argue是感觉是对不同意的事情发表观点，这里用my mother and I had some disagreement on...

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Nobody does not like gifts, especially which can make us happy.
I have received a nice gift, a scarf. At that time I argued with (argue是感觉是对不同意的事情发表观点，这里用my mother and I had some disagreement on something.) my mother. We didn't want to talk with (改成talk to。 Talk with 是谈论某事)each other.But the next day, she gived （改成gave）me a beautiful scarf. She says（改成 said）,"Don't have （ 改成 catch 或get）a cold." I was really excited （应该是moved吧。。。怎么会突然欣喜若狂。。。）and I said,"Thank you, mom." She smiled. I think she wasn't mad at me anymore（甭用mad...mad是真疯子，1楼帅_001改成angry了。挺好的）. I know, I got a gift not just（语法太神奇了！）, I also received her love. I love her as before（吵个架就不爱老娘了？！雷！I know, what I have gotten is not only a scarf but something with my mom's love. I love her always).
I usually wear the scarf in winter. I can think of my lovely mother when I see it. I think it's my favorite gift. (I wear this scarf in winter these years which makes me remind my beloved mom).

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