我有一篇演讲稿,请帮忙看看有没有语法上的错误,顺便为我改一下演讲稿.Good morning everyone!My name is Anny.I'm very happy to stand here.Today I'd like to say something about "my favourite sport".My favourite sport is swimmi
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我有一篇演讲稿,请帮忙看看有没有语法上的错误,顺便为我改一下演讲稿.Good morning everyone!My name is Anny.I'm very happy to stand here.Today I'd like to say something about "my favourite sport".My favourite sport is swimmi
我有一篇演讲稿,请帮忙看看有没有语法上的错误,顺便为我改一下演讲稿.
Good morning everyone!My name is Anny.I'm very happy to stand here.Today I'd like to say something about "my favourite sport".My favourite sport is swimming.I like summer,because in summer I can swimming.Swimming is good for our healthy.So I often swim with my friends in the afternoon.Please come on with us.Let's swimming!Are you ready?Thanks for listening!
我有一篇演讲稿,请帮忙看看有没有语法上的错误,顺便为我改一下演讲稿.Good morning everyone!My name is Anny.I'm very happy to stand here.Today I'd like to say something about "my favourite sport".My favourite sport is swimmi
because in summer I can swimming.改为:swim
Swimming is good for our healthy前加一个词:besides, 另外是health
Let's swimming:加一个go
My favourite sport is 前加一个:For me,
楼上的同志已经把少之又少的错误帮你挑出来了,,
只不过,,,
这真的是一篇演讲稿???
这篇小小的演讲稿虽然很简洁,,但是在逻辑上有点。。。。。那你帮我修改一下吧!我都不知道该怎么才好啦!求求你啦怎么跟你说呢,,你是想要就这么简单的,,也是可以的主要是他要求是一分钟的演讲稿Good morning everyone!My name is Anny.I'm very happ...
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楼上的同志已经把少之又少的错误帮你挑出来了,,
只不过,,,
这真的是一篇演讲稿???
这篇小小的演讲稿虽然很简洁,,但是在逻辑上有点。。。。。
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