六级作文批改!之前考四六级的时候作文之前都没练过,导致分数普遍不高,这次想还是连连吧,因此写了一篇发上来请高手看看.The importance of reading classics1、 阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要2

六级作文批改!之前考四六级的时候作文之前都没练过,导致分数普遍不高,这次想还是连连吧,因此写了一篇发上来请高手看看.The importance of reading classics1、 阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要2
六级作文批改!
之前考四六级的时候作文之前都没练过,导致分数普遍不高,这次想还是连连吧,因此写了一篇发上来请高手看看.
The importance of reading classics
1、 阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要
2、 现在愿意阅读经典的人越来越少,原因是……
3、 我们大学生应该怎么做
Asked what will reading classics do,theresponse of many advocators may have a reliable answer:the greatestcontribution of classic books is positive for humans’ development.Nevertheless,there are less and less people who are willing to read these books today.
This situation is based on several factors.Firstly,people have no leisure time to immerse in the classics world.As weall know,in our contemporary,people had to finish a myriad of tasks everyday.As a result,they fail to read classic books due to lacking time.Secondly,modern people prefer to read those books which instruct them how to get successor work efficiently.Classic books,nonetheless,are unable to improve peoplein a short period.Subsequently,they are being forgotten by the public.
For our college students,in myperspective,we should read classics books during our campus life.Readingclassics could teach us how to be a good guy.In addition,our undergraduateshave much free time.So we have time and necessary to focus on excellent books.

六级作文批改!之前考四六级的时候作文之前都没练过,导致分数普遍不高,这次想还是连连吧,因此写了一篇发上来请高手看看.The importance of reading classics1、 阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要2
第一段的less and less好像怪怪的,应该改成there are very seldom people.
第二段的As weall know是As well know
第三段的excellent books好像用得不对,应该是用good来代替excellent就好了(good books)
So we have time and necessary to focus on excellent books.
应该是...
So, we should take the time out to read those good books.
很多字应该要分开写,是忘记了吗?
比如说the response,greatest contribution,people in,my perspective,reading classics,undergraduates have.
纯属意见.